The Iron Tide of the Afterlife

My first book has some shortcomings, but it was a lot of hard work. I have to reward myself with a five-star review! [Cool][cool]

The language of the whole text is fluent, the writing is relaxed and natural, and it is free and easy. It's really a production called successful. Although the language is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, the emotions are rich and true, and it is enjoyable to read. The structure and editing of the article are reasonable, and the author has a very deep and thorough understanding of the original text. The language of the full text is sonorous and powerful, and it makes people excited and excited when reading it. This article has pleasant material, wonderful conception, lively language, and a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines. The full text is narrated in a concentrated manner, without delay, with simple and fluent language, and sincere and touching feelings. The tone is relaxed and humorous, and it is full of wit and wit. It is hard to put down when reading. The author's conception is clever, and he only focuses on finding points to develop the text, which is full of ups and downs and is thought-provoking. There are quite a few noteworthy pieces of furniture throughout the article, which add some literary interest to the article.

This science fiction novel by the author should be considered a very good one. I can feel that the author's values ​​are very correct, the world he writes is very beautiful, and the language he uses is very rich and appropriate. It is a very good book.

The author has a strong foundation of knowledge in the field of gaming technology and nerd settings, and the overall writing is smooth. To sum it up, there are two flaws: First of all, the writing is not enjoyable anyway. There is no need to stick to the three elements of writing. Looking at other comments, this will make some serious readers think it is a bit poisonous. As the saying goes, if you don't take what God gives you, you will be punished. Secondly, the protagonist currently does not show a "character arc" or "personality quality" that can distinguish other online protagonists. Compared with many supporting characters, the protagonist's characterization still lacks a certain tension. Well... Of course, these are not reasons worthy of lowering the rating, but a room for improvement. I believe that after the author's ability to continue to create cool things improves, he can move to other places and charge for chapters. [Sinister smile]

I said I wanted to read the first science fiction novel, but I didn't take the time to read it until now. I couldn't put it down after reading it. I have to say: the author's imagination is too big. How much time and energy it takes to reconstruct a system. The most important thing is that the reality and the fictional world are well combined. It is not obtrusive. It can be seen between the lines that the author has put his heart into it. The scene characterization and species description opened up a new world for me. It is well written and I look forward to the follow-up. This book is worth recommending [Like] The good looks continue, the excitement continues

It's an imaginative and refreshing science fiction novel, I'm asking you if you want to read it! It will definitely blind you with your tricks! If you don't believe me, try it! [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] The author has a novel, unique and classic idea! Good is just one word!

This sect leader has run out of words, it looks great! Very nice! ! Very nice! ! So pretty! ! ! !

I quite like it, but it's a little lacking.

An hour-long five-star review, do what you say [laughing]

This book has a very good worldview. I'm just curious why so few people read [what] Hmm. . . I'm looking forward to what the future will be like with the Earth and Blue Star or other fruits [eating melon]