Transformed into a Cool, Aloof Fairy from the Start

Babies who have read the book can leave your comments and support if you like it. This book is not a eunuch, because the author also has a serious job and only takes time to update it after get off work. Although there are not many updates, he tries his best to ensure that it is updated continuously. This book is not written for profit, I just have a dream to be a writer and write some stories that I like~

Although it doesn't reach the climax of the story, it's the most beautiful transformation story I've seen on Tomato, and it suits my taste. Good looking. . . . . .

The writing is very good, I hope the protagonist can stay single forever

I think it's very good. Long Aotian is cool and cool, which is in line with what I like. The plot is also very good. I like it very much and hope to continue it to the end. I also want to maintain the quality and efficiency, but the author is not an old author who has written many novels. It's understandable if you can't, but I hope I can do it. I don't insist that I can do it. I hope that the author's book will be rich in content and efficient, so that many people can read this book. I also hope that the author can make this book a big success [laughing][laughing][laughing].

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I have read a lot of transformation novels, and it is really rare to find this type of transformation novel. It is so in line with my taste. I have read many good-looking transformation novels in the past, but they were either discontinued or unfinished. There are also a large part of the transformation novels that sell sheep over others. The plot is as tasteless as boiled water, but it is a pity to abandon it. Thank you to the author for his great efforts! Keep up the good work! I will reward you, and I hope it won't be unfinished or discontinued.

It's well written. I hope the author won't stop updating. Every novel I encounter always stops updating. It's best for the author to keep the manuscript.

First of all, I highly recommend this book. It is very delicate and the writing is very good. The writing style of describing the heroine is very engaging. It is really a thoughtful book. In addition, let's talk about some shortcomings: the content of the first story is very exciting, but it lacks the ending explanation. What happened to the Lin family in the end? Is the first male protagonist dead or alive? The specific reason for the betrayal of the second son of the Lin family? Instead of killing for the sake of formation, what can he get after killing? Another suggestion is to add more slaps in the face, so that the protagonist can take the initiative to turn the tide and let others know about it. Many of the previous scenes are silently handled that others don't know, and there can be more emotional interaction with the male protagonist. The kind where the male protagonist likes the female protagonist because of various misunderstandings, such as the time when the female protagonist helped Lin Xian slap the girl in the face who broke off the engagement. He playfully gave Lin Xian a bunch of meatballs. The scene was really beautiful and fit the setting of slap in the face. It looked like the sweetness of love and the refreshing feeling of green tea slap in the face.

It's quite good, and the writing is smooth. If you ask me, the author shouldn't worry too much. He can write whatever he wants, whether it's about combat or daily life. The readership community is like a radish, everyone has their own preferences, and it is impossible to satisfy everyone's preferences. Therefore, according to your own ideas and writing according to your heart, it will be smooth, natural and fascinating. At most, in some plots that may cause controversy, just use () to explain them. Oops, there are always people behind many plots who are obsessed with the defense between men and women and have a grudge against them. It's completely unnecessary. I think it's just a natural emotion and there's no need to worry about it.

Come on, it's the plot I like, or the sentence that says you can have suitors, you can't change your marriage, and you can't like a man like this, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to watch.