Notes on Raising Dragons

The subject matter is novel and the plot is good, but the characterization of the characters is not detailed enough. Secondly, the writing style is not good at expressing the emotions of the protagonist. The beginning of the chapter emphasizes protecting the family, but what is the reason for protecting the family? Why is there such a strong will? No explanation was given. Also, during a crisis, the protagonist should be very serious, why would there be humorous statements? This is what I cannot accept the most, and it makes me unable to take part in the plot. Let's not talk about the logic issues. In short, the author still needs to consider the details carefully. These four stars are given for subject matter and encouragement to the author. By the way, the role of Hu Zhaozhao is really bad. An official agency, you created this deceitful woman. Moreover, it is an organization that concerns human lives.

To be honest and objective, the author of this book should have no background. Everything he talks about is social reality, and the characters are also very distinct. It is maliciously suppressed by the official, but the writing is really good. I recommend it.

There are ideas, the article is novel and innovative, a good book

The writing is very good and there is no fancy title. I like it very much.

This is a good book worth reading. The author's writing style is already very good in Tomato. The author does not deliberately write people with their own personalities, and there is no black and white distinction. The plot is also unconventional, with ups and downs. (The author sees that I am so serious about my evaluation and will add an update) Please don't stop updating [Sending my heart] It's so good, I'd love to read more. I really like the setting of this novel.

It's really novel, and the setting is interesting. It's not like the kind of lousy hierarchical and mindless cool articles. It has both reflections on reality and strange imagination. Why don't you read such an interesting book [][][][]

The book is good and worth reading carefully

You can see, that's all

I really hope the author can continue writing, it's a pity that such a good work

I really read it word for word. I read every other article at a glance. I really couldn't bear to read it. It was too short [crying] I hope the author will stick to his own ideas and not be dictated by the trolls in the comment area. I think the author's writing is very good. Was it written under a trumpet created by a master? [Laughing] Generally speaking, the articles written by male authors have a sense of hostility, and they are quick to kill people, gods, and the air. There are many people who oppose men and women in the comment area. The three views of this article are very consistent with reality. The author is a person who sees the society clearly and still has love in his heart.