Reborn as a Woman, and I Have a Fiancé?

The writing is good and the plot is well arranged and very comfortable. The most important point is that the heroine had better keep her body intact. The author also wrote in Chapter 29 of the article, "Only you, I have not completely obtained. Among the relationships that Qin Li has ever had, only Ling Ya has the slowest progress. Not being able to get her always makes him uncomfortable." This sentence gave me, a person with a bit of mental mysophobia, the motivation to continue reading. Nowadays, many people do not read novels so carefully. The author had better explain this clearly in the article in the future. Keep up to date! It's really well written [like].

It's very beautiful. It's not like the author's first time writing a book. The storyline is exquisitely arranged, especially in dealing with the emotional problems of the male and female protagonists, and resolving the conflicts between the two one by one. However, I saw two living people with flesh and blood, which is something I rarely see in the marriage-changing novels. However, the writing on changing marriages is in a slump, and I don't know if the author can persist. I am very much looking forward to the author's updates [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

You... Are very good, the plot interests me very much, it is quite vivid, please update it! ! !

I read a lot of cross-marriage stories and some of them are time-travel ones. Your story line is very good, but there are some places where it feels a bit contradictory, but overall it's good. Keep up the good work [Chigua]

It's very good to read. I read Regression Line first. It's great that the two books are linked to each other. The length is also appropriate so that I won't feel tired. It's so satisfying to read two books in three days. I support the author greatly [Blow a kiss]

The author's writing style is very good, and the subject of marriage change is also very good. The only flaw is that the plot develops a bit too fast and the time span is a bit large. More than 100 chapters describe the story of one or two years, and finally jumps to the marriage. This is not a good point. More details can be described. , Think more about the story during this period. The villain is an indispensable element in a novel, but there are too many villains in it, but few descriptions, and there is no tense situation. I hope the author can put more effort into these aspects.

It's a very good article that won't rub my brain to the ground, without any obvious collapse of logic or character. The author's writing style is a bit green, and some plots are too forced, but the overall flaws are not hidden, and I can read it immersed. I like it when the heroine and the hero speak directly. I am a straightforward person and never mince words. The heroine's character is a bit similar to mine, but I can find a sense of empathy. In addition, this is the only CEO story in which the male protagonist's business is in line with the president's personality. When guessing the male protagonist's identity, the clues and reasoning are also well written and seamless. Moreover, the male protagonist does not repeatedly struggle with his own identity. It is very good and has no ink. All in all, this is the most comfortable movie I have ever seen in Tomato. The speed at the end is ridiculously fast. Anyway, it is very nice and sweet.

As a novice author, this is already very good, but I still have to talk about the problem with the plot, that is, the protagonist's identity is exposed and the male protagonist quickly accepts the protagonist after knowing the truth. The plot develops too fast. It would be better to slow down the pace in this section, and there are no other problems. If the author wants to further his studies in the changing marriage genre, he can try other types. After all, the daily limit is not high, and there are not many points that can be written. It is actually very important for the main character to change from male to female. (It is best to write this process in a long and detailed way, mainly based on the plot). Coupled with an excellent plot, it will be an excellent changing marriage article. However, the biggest taboo in a changing marriage article is not to be toxic. Come on, author!

I was very surprised to read this book. After reading a lot of novels, I discovered this female novel. I have tried a lot of articles about female videos before, but not many of them were enjoyable to read. This book can actually contain both male and female videos. I don't know if it's because the number of words is too small. The author has some details and a general description, but overall this book is very enjoyable to read, especially in the later stages when the speed of the car is a bit fast and the child's nutrition cannot keep up [laughter]. At first I thought this book was only related to the Tropic of Tropic book, but then another one also appeared, and the three books were related to each other. It was quite surprising. It is definitely a better book. After all, the mainstream nowadays is all about lesbians. There are not many people who are reborn as girls and have male and female partners like this. Please support it. I believe I am a brother, so come and take a look, but I have to keep up with nutrition [laughter]

It's quite interesting, and it's also a story about changing a marriage! It's almost turning my ideal into reality. Maybe the world won't allow it, and I can't jump off the Ferris wheel, and I don't like eating chicken breasts... But you can dream, go to bed now~[sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]