Dark Glory: She Has Everyone Falling at Her Feet

[Licking the screen] [licking the screen] [licking the screen] [licking the screen] People who can't get Ha Doyoung Goodbye [licking the screen] [licking the screen] [licking the screen] Ha Doyoung... Who knows [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

The story is good and the ending is good, but I suggest you not to borrow too much from the original plot when writing fan fiction in the future. In fact, most of the previous parts made me feel that the heroine replaced the original heroine and her role was gone. It is difficult for people to have the desire to continue reading. It feels like the same plot with a different protagonist. I hope you can continue to work hard.

I hope the male protagonist is Zhou Ruzheng. If not, can you write a side story? I just feel that Ha Doyoung will not give up on Yesol. After the heroine and the hero get together, won't the heroine mind if they live together? The child is indeed innocent, but the heroine is also innocent. Maybe I'm a bit of a double-cleanser.

I prefer Zhou Ruzheng's ending, maybe because I don't want the heroine to be a stepmother. Otherwise it's quite good-looking, not much different from the original work, except that the protagonist is changed...

The full text is quite smooth to read. The only shortcoming is that Jinglan's character does not have many characteristics and there are few descriptions. The biggest feeling after reading it is that it looks like the reskinned version of Wen Dongen, but the core is still the same old story and plot.

It's great. This is the best book I've ever read in Dark Glory.

To be honest, I'm a little disappointed. The setting of Jinglan in the article is biased toward a heartthrob. Several male characters who appeared in the original work have a crush on her, and the plot of Dong En is also set on her. The plot of the villain group reaping the consequences has been changed, but the ending is still successful in revenge. Dong Eun has another person who loves her. Jing Lan's ending is open-ended in the main text. The subsequent extras give her happy endings with Ha Doying and Zhou Ruzheng respectively.

It's very useful. I finished it in one night. This kind of finished article is better to read. You can read it all at once. It's more enjoyable. Dark Glory is a very well-written fanfic. It has some shortcomings. Some titles or words are translated into Korean with Chinese homophones. At this time, It seems strange and a bit funny, but there are few, and the problems are not big. Many of his parts are very interesting. For example, the story of the heroine and Wen Dongen teaming up to resist school bullying. There is a sentence that is really suitable, that is, justice may be late, but it will never be absent. , I don't want school bullying to happen again in this world. It is really harmful to students' minds and bodies. The author's three views are also very upright, and the writing is still very upright. The protagonist declares his dissatisfaction with the bullies, and finally sends the bullies to the path they should take. This book is fluently written, very interesting to read, and contains deep social philosophy. It is worthy of you to carefully appreciate its profound meaning. I hope you will take it as a warning [Thinking] [Thinking] Second brush, it looks good

I think the role of Jin Jinglan is relatively perfect. She is beautiful, smart and scheming. She can use other people's likes to achieve the results she wants. She is tolerant and ruthless enough!

I want to see the interaction between Ha Doyoung and Kim Young Ran