The Marquis Who Guards the North of Great Qin

It's much more beautiful than other books of the same type. It's not just about making money by talking about modern things, and the strategies are also quite good, and the world view is quite big. A few more small comments, the harem should be kept, or else just don't write so many female characters, but don't just treat the harem as a vase, the tool person, the doctor currently has a very bad impression, the protagonist feels sorry for her (and has some ambiguity with the bald head) while treating her as a tool person, it feels like she is just to treat the protagonist group, and then just throw it away. There are several other harems that are more or less like vases. The harem group still hopes to be more capable and not just spend their time on being vases. Also, when writing a female character, there is no need to have one character that will captivate the country. Just say beauty. Every time, there are several adjectives [face-covering] to make the country beautiful per capita, regardless of whether it is the protagonist's harem or not. I haven't read it for a long time, so I continued to read it this time, and it turns out that there are some immortals. I feel that the author is a bit out of his depth. I originally thought that the plot was starting to get boring, so I haven't watched it for a long time. But the author's idea was to come up with something new, like some fairy tale. It was originally more about martial arts, but now it's more about fantasy. I personally don't like it.

A new fan group has been created. Everyone is welcome to join in the exchange. You can see it on my author homepage! I have been rewriting the text recently. The main plot and character relationships will not change, but some changes will be made to some confusing settings, inconsistencies, typos and some criticisms. The first dozens of chapters were rewritten because I was not satisfied with them, and they will overlap around chapter 42. I could still continue writing without changing it, but I decided to change it in order to keep improving. For me, revising the article is equivalent to working overtime for free, and may even cause a loss of traffic, but in order to show my friends a more exciting plot and a more enjoyable reading experience, I gritted my teeth and joined this class. If new friends feel that the connection between the front and back is not smooth, they can add it to their bookshelf collection first. Old friends can rest assured that because the main plot and character relationships remain unchanged, and updates will not be discontinued, it will not have much impact. We will inform you again after the changes are completed. We also hope that you have any good opinions or suggestions at this time. We may not necessarily adopt them all, but we will adopt them as appropriate. After the revision is completed, no matter how good the suggestion is, I will not adopt it because revising the article is too painful and I don't want to do it a second time [face covering]

The book is very beautiful and I cannot say "like" it. The main reason is that the update is very, very slow. I wonder if I, a very healthy person born in the 1980s, will be able to read it in my lifetime? [Laughing] @mohan

Very good, not boring

It's so well written, I hope I won't copy it later.

It's okay, it's worth watching, I hope you keep it and don't let it down.

The book is a good book, but I read it at the wrong time. I didn't notice that there are so few chapters. The two hundred or so chapters are not even an outline. It will probably take half a year. The author conservatively estimates that it will be around 1,200 chapters... I will leave it for now and read it again after the New Year...

Very good. Many sentences in the book are insightful and worth learning.

This book is one of the few I've read on Tomato that I'm fascinated by. I hope the author can persevere and this book will definitely become a hit.

This book's rating of 8.2 Is really puzzling! This is a great book!