He Came from Azkaban

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It's a very interesting novel with a very innovative theme. Does the author want to write about the mutual redemption between the protagonist and Hermione? What's more, is Hermione's redemption of the protagonist and rejuvenate his inner humanity... I hope the author will stick to it. It will be exciting. Now that I see it, I feel it's okay, a bit sharp and messy (although the author did it intentionally for the effect), but it's still okay after a while.

When I first watched it, it was just one word, it was confusing, but after watching it, you will find that it is connected with the previous one, a kind of narrative technique, the same technique as the movie (actor, cook, scoundrel), the effect comes first and the cause comes later, but it is very interesting. To be honest, I couldn't understand it at all if I read it so fast, all the narration was

The writing is very good. The timeline of past, present and future forms a perfect closed loop. However, the relationship between Ste and Hermione is not very delicate, making the plot of mutual rescue not very deep. I didn't find it memorable when I read it, but that's what a short story is, so it's still good. I hope that the final ending will be grand and wonderful. The ending can be written in more than ten chapters, but I don't know how to end it with Hermione's future and present bodies. The environment does a good job of rendering the atmosphere, but it doesn't have much writing. It's like 24K gold in a pile of tomato shit.

Although I have read a lot of Harry Potter fanfics, I think this one is Tomato's second Harry Potter fanfic, and there is another one called I Am Death. The structure of this book is very different from I Am Death. This book mainly focuses on emotional descriptions and brain-burning plots. The author can associate this with the original work. There are so many things that I didn't expect. When I first saw Time Turner, I knew that the plot was not simple, but it was actually acceptable and not that complicated. If you read it carefully the first time, you can understand it almost. If you continue writing, it will definitely be another popular masterpiece. Come on, author, I believe in you. The most touching thing in this book is actually the determination of Steve and Hermione to sacrifice everything for each other and their sincere feelings. I have never seen anyone who can write about love so boldly [send heart][send heart][send heart]

Just because he hasn't finished updating it, if he finished it, I might reconsider and give this book a five-star rating.

Well, it's a good idea to start with the Patronus Charm, and then write out various unreasonable places and reasonable explanations. Although I have only read the first 20 chapters and haven't read the rest, I already understand the general direction, such as why a person who has traveled through time will hear other people's voices when being absorbed by dementors. It is recommended not to skip chapters or you will not understand. If you haven't read Harry Potter's analysis and plot of the time ball in this novel, you will easily get confused.

To be honest, this book is indeed quite shocking among Harry's books. There are no coincidences or favors. It's all another person's silent contribution. The strength of this book is that the pen is laid out from the beginning, and the subsequent pictures are recycled and read very smoothly. However, such writing requires a high level of writing power. Although it is very exciting, the plot is There is still no big closed loop. For example, the male protagonist escaped from Azkaban because Hermione traveled through time and learned to call the God Guard, but this was based on the fact that he could escape and see Hermione in the future. So how did the male protagonist escape from Azkaban in the first place and meet Hermione to start the closed loop? Therefore, there is a missing part of the plot and pitfalls. It might be more exciting if the male protagonist's first escape and the second escape after meeting Hermione were written separately. Overall, it's a pretty good book. [Like] Worth watching.

The writing is pretty good, the CP between the protagonist and Hermione, but it would be even better if the author could show Hermione's reaction after reading the protagonist's memory and discovering that she is a person in the book. Because Hermione looked through the protagonist's memory, she can completely discover that the protagonist is a time traveler, and she is a character in a book in his past life. Therefore, Hermione will definitely be surprised after reading it, and her love for the protagonist's yandere makes her actively and selectively ignore (reject) her original destiny. At the same time, she loves the present with the protagonist even more, which deepens her love for the protagonist. This not only adds depth to Hermione's character, but also has some interesting points, which can make the CP scientists more happy and adapt to the development of the plot. In addition, the author's timeline is a bit off. I'm afraid the author himself doesn't understand the combination of multiple timelines. He is just showing off his skills purely for the sake of showing off his skills. The words about plasma are too dramatic. In addition, the author doesn't like to reply to readers' words, which is a bit frustrating. Since I rated five stars before, I will rate this one as three stars. To put it all together, there are two four stars.

I would like to call this book a masterpiece! The use of this time converter is so good. I was a little dizzy when I first opened it, but I suddenly realized it after reading it later!