Genshin Impact: A Hilichurl's Body, a God's Might

Go go go! Go go go!

Having reached Chapter 8, it's alright so far. If you have any suggestions, feel free to use this page. Regarding the protagonist's combat system, we've already reached 400,000 words, and the combat system is already well-developed, but I still want to say... (What I'll say next is a personal digression.)

It's super good! As for why nobody's reading it, I personally think it's because the public has such a deep-seated stereotype about Hilichurls that it creates a sense of aversion. Plus, there aren't many novels of this type, and the ratings aren't high, so people subconsciously assume this book isn't very good, and therefore have no desire to read it.

Although his writing is still a bit immature, you can tell he put a lot of effort into it. And you can feel his progress. Keep up the good work, kid, don't let this go to waste!

It's good. The author added a lot of things to Genshin Impact's original plot and power system. These extra things make this book feel fresh even if you've read a lot of Genshin Impact fanfiction.

It looks so good and there's plenty of content, so why isn't anyone watching it?

I finished reading it. The protagonist's personality is good, and within the realm of Genshin Impact fanfiction by Tomato, it's quite excellent. There's no female lead, no inappropriate raunchy jokes, and no uncomfortable descriptions of female characters—well… maybe there's a tiny bit, but it's perfectly acceptable within the context of Tomato's Genshin Impact fanfiction.

More like a world than a game, the expanded settings and plot arrangements are far more reasonable than most fanfiction I've seen. The story's development is also very clear, and the interweaving of side quests and main plots is well-executed. Most importantly, I haven't seen any characters out of character so far, which is truly impressive.

It's very well written, but nobody reads it.

Overall, it's very good. The content is clear and has its own unique setting. The data is rigorous, but the pacing is too slow (mainly because it's not enough to keep you entertained). Also, the combat system has too many added elements, which feels like both supplementing the original setting and deviating from the source material for a fanfiction. Some people might not like it.