The Sweet Young Lord Will Marry No One but the General

It's good-looking, I'm older, I just like sweet stories, I'm just waiting for it to be finished.

It was very interesting, but there was a scene where Duan Li wanted to make Zhou jealous and brought a young boy home, which made people very unhappy. Moreover, the young boy rubbed his back and acted recklessly without being punished, which made people feel very unhappy😠

I thought it was cruel, but I didn't expect it to be sweet, sweet love, not bad, not bad

Marry first and then love, first a little abuse and then a light pursuit of your wife. The plot of the story is full of ups and downs and exciting, the thickness of the pen and ink is appropriate, the appearance is detailed, the action description is vivid, the writing style is consistent with the ancient prose genre, and the writing style is natural and smooth. The protagonists have different personalities and distinct images, and the CP is also very easy to beat. In the article, the plot of Zhou Zihan being abducted and sold to Zhaixing Pavilion is gripping, and the plot of punishing Fu Qingshu and others is very satisfying. Although there are not many chapters in the novel, it does correspond to the saying "Although a sparrow is small, it has all five internal organs." Whether it is the connection of plots or the transition of emotions, it is just right. The love experience of the main CP is touching, and the emotional concepts revealed by the author benefit a lot. All in all, a decent cookie, sweet but not greasy, highly recommended! ! !

Although it is necessary for the plot to let Li know how to cherish after losing him, A Niu's part is really heartbreaking, and Qi Che's part is also heartbreaking. It is a bit written for the sake of routine, but the length is so long, overall it is not bad. I look forward to more mature works. It is indeed written quite realistically. He is not very young yet. He is just a pampered and innocent young man. He has the filter of a hero saving the beauty. With a heart that fell in love at first sight, Li also fell in love with his beauty at first. The relationship between the two of them is not mature yet.

The overall structure of the article is quite complete, and the framework feels well designed. The main CP is sweet from beginning to end. There are also misunderstandings in the middle but they are all solved perfectly. However, because the article is too small, there are not many details and the pace is a bit fast. This is also a common problem with short articles. The deputy CP is also quite sweet, but the process is too frugal, making the relationship seem very abrupt. If you like sweet stories, you can read them, but don't be too thoughtful when reading them. Just read them as a bedtime story. Overall, it's a very good article.

I think it should be sweet from beginning to end, but the middle part is a bit cruel (in my opinion) However, I personally like that the second male lead has a happy ending. He is no longer the lonely one watching the protagonists love each other. The secondary CP is also very sweet. In fact, I think the later stage was better than the early stage, because the two of them fell in love with each other in the early stage. Most of the reason is because it looks better. The show of affection in the later period is more interesting, but I personally feel that the ending in the later period is a bit deliberately hasty, as if it ended suddenly because of something. At first I thought there would be a rebellion. After all, there were people in the court who were against him, but there was no later stage, so it ended suddenly. It's quite sweet in other places. If you ignore this and don't remember it, this story with two male protagonists is considered mediocre.

Overall, it's good. The focus is on the gradual cycle of the emotional line, starting from the initial lust and then going through some non-abusive plots. The inner drama is portrayed in detail and I am very satisfied. Understatement and highlighting the theme. I really like this pair of CPs. I give it 99 points and deduct one point for the rush at the end.

You can check it out. The content is exciting. Mr. Zhou and General Li are very good at fighting each other, and the pair of deputy CPs, King Chen and Wushuang, are also very sweet.

It's really beautiful! ! ! No loss in investing! ! ! I just have a small suggestion. I hope the author can divide it into sections. It seems a little tiring to read in large sections. [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] I wish Li Yan and Zhou Zihan will always be happy in another parallel time and space! ! ! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]