Bloodbath at the Border: Starting My Sign-In at the Yalu River

I've been writing this new book for over ten days now, and I welcome everyone to point out any shortcomings. As a Tomato newbie, I hope to get guidance from experienced bookworms, identify my shortcomings, and improve myself! Thank you everyone!

A very good book, I'd give it five stars.

It's not bad, but the system is a bit lazy 🤭🤭

Make the protagonist more vivid and highlight his personality, and exaggerate the system weapons even more.

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I don't read novels to frustrate myself; I crave those super-powerful, wish-fulfillment stories.