Bloodbath at the Border: Starting My Sign-In at the Yalu River

It has been more than ten days since I wrote the new book. Everyone is welcome to point out the shortcomings. As a newbie in Tomato, I hope to get some advice from you old bookworms to find out my shortcomings and improve myself at the same time! Thank you all!

It's a very good book. I give it a five-star rating.

Not bad, but the system is a bit lazy [laughing][laughing]

Make the protagonist more distinct, highlight his personality, and exaggerate the system weapons

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I don't read novels to cause trouble for myself. What I want is this kind of refreshing novel that takes the worry out of the equation.