I Inherited a Sect From the Start, and All My Disciples Are Players

Very well written, the story is lively and interesting. The details are exquisite. This may be the second time in many years that I felt the charm of the novel after listening to the book. I hope it will be updated soon, and I will try my best to reward you. I hope fellow Taoists will work hard.

A very interesting novel. Instead of the protagonists of various novels becoming disciples, Blue Star recruits people and adds natives. Some suggestions: Since it is a cultivator, although players can be resurrected, they cannot attack too hard... Although the natives are digitized, it is indeed a bit outrageous to kill the crystallization stage with the foundation layer. The resurrection setting should prevent everyone from being affected by high-level battles or massacred by evil cultivators. The high-level monks are not simply killed by the human sea tactics. Now the first sequence is equivalent to at least crossing a big realm to brush the natives. This should not be possible for Xiao Zong, who is born in the protagonist template. And yesterday, we must consider that the later stage will definitely be a large-scale recruitment. In reality, if the training consortium can be stationed, everyone relies on the high-level monks who are the human sea tactics, so it is meaningless.

5 Stars. The subject matter is really good. Bookshelf added. My feeling is that it's too fast to write something that affects the real world. I suggest adding some plots from movies and TV shows, and making it more difficult to acquire real-life skills. Personal opinion. . .

I have read a lot of novels of the same type, and this one is quite good. The plot is indeed slow, but this is also a good point. This kind of novel is afraid of the collapse of the system. When I first saw that the system can be upgraded casually for tens of thousands, I was also afraid that the system would not be able to hold up. Fortunately, there is no situation where players build foundations in one day and soar in two days. Judging from the current plot, it is still the type of map expansion, sect level improvement, walking out of the mountain of 100,000, etc.; But the linkage with the official Blue Star, the idea of ​​embodying the strength of Blue Star players is very good, it depends on whether the author can grasp it in the later stage, so look forward to it ~

Writing a book is not easy, five-star praise The demining is completed, immortal cultivation + sect development + fourth natural disaster + system, the idea is quite good, but the plot setting is a little messy, and the author's desire to take it all is directly reflected on the screen, which is not good. (While writing about the players, I also added a lot of unconventional indigenous plots, especially Xiao Huohuo. Not only does it make people feel out of touch, but it also slows down the pace.) I hope that the output will be stable and innovative in the future, and I hope it won't collapse. Support the new book and like it.

The plot is quite new and very interesting. It seems that there is no Yingying Yanyan who has been following the plot line and not paying attention to the emotional line. To be honest, I don't like this kind of immortality book to have too many emotional lines, so I think this book is very good so far.

I read over a hundred chapters in one go. The plot is not too ups and downs, but overall it is still very good. I think the biggest highlight is that the anchors and NPCs are very well portrayed and very immersive. But later on, as the number of players increased, this feeling diminished a lot. I hope the author can write faster

It's very beautiful, with a very novel way of writing. Sometimes I can laugh to the point of tears. Players can always do something interesting in this world. The plot of the player is very interesting. The protagonist's plot comes up one after another, and it doesn't matter if he is submissive and fearful, or if the sky falls. For example, while I didn't dare to accept Xiong Xinqiao for fear that his physique would cause trouble, I told Mr. Qian that I had just met that I could change the spiritual root, and that I was not afraid of revealing the disciple's resurrection. He knelt down for half a month and did not dare to accept Xiong Xinqiao for fear of causing trouble. His various resurrecting and other unnatural methods let people know that he was not afraid of causing trouble. In Chapter 142, he said he wanted to save that person, but the system said he couldn't save him. The protagonist also said he must try. In the next chapter, he was in danger and said he wasn't familiar with him? No help. . ? ? ?

The structure is quite novel, and the atmosphere of the previous sect is quite immersive. It's just that the protagonist's character is not well written, and after listening to 110 episodes, it feels like this game can't be played by people without money except for recharging money. It can be easily recharged by hundreds of thousands or hundreds of thousands. Ordinary people don't need to play it when the server is opened. The title says that all disciples are players.

After reading it, the writing is quite detailed but not verbose. The fourth natural disaster is very violent, but it still feels within the reasonable range. After all, so much money has been charged, and there are not too many single elements. For example, if you keep writing about life, you will get tired while reading. There will be some story lines interspersed, which is plain but not monotonous.