The Outcast: Watching the Big Shots in Person

I really like this book, and I'm looking forward to what the King of Wu-Tang's expression will be like when our protagonist's strength is revealed? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I didn't read it for long, I admit it, but the book does have quite a big problem. Firstly, this kind of fan fiction mentions the CP of the original work, especially in the BL direction. To be honest, some people will be offended (although there are not many elements. I don't mean to find fault and get scolded, I just hope that people who mind will go around and don't step on the offender); secondly, the heroine's character It's quite wrong. We are indeed very enthusiastic in this industry, but we don't blush when we meet people, let alone pick up nicknames and blurt them out naturally when we just meet them. Thirdly, hasn't the heroine been a cow horse for so long in her previous life? Why are you so innocent and childish like a child? Not very understanding. It seems that there are actually elements of Mary Sue in it, author. However, although there are many loopholes, there are also very big advantages. The characters in this article are not broken, and there is no OOC, which is congratulatory. Many fanfics cannot do this for the sake of fun; and the heroine has clear psychological changes, which is in line with the impact of social changes from the peaceful and prosperous world to the alien world; the storyline is okay, most of the original plot has been slightly modified, and there is no discomfort caused by the huge changes in other fanfics. Generally speaking, the highlights are very bright, and there are some highlights, so read as appropriate. Finally, I want to point out here that I give my opinions objectively and hope that the author can improve his writing style and thinking. I have no intention of denying the author's efforts in producing food to feed poor people like us who are about to starve to death (I actually cherish this fan book very much), and I have no intention of provoking a fight. Some people should not over-interpret it and come uninvited. I am very hard to listen to and my mouth is poisonous due to personal experience. Don't blame me for being unreasonable and breaking your defense [shy][shy][shy] Finally, I give you a kind and shy∀ Forget it, I looked back and saw that the characters were not very good, and some of the plots were extremely awkward. I won't say more, I will understand it after reading it myself. If you like real Mary Sues and accept a series of stupid and cute behaviors such as the heroine's coquettishness, then go watch it. The front is fine, but the back is broken

I like this type of drama very much, but now the heroine in the plot doesn't like Ma Hongxian, right? [I'm about to cry] It's very good-looking, but I still feel that it matches Taoist Wang Ye better. I feel [sending my heart]

Good-looking and good-looking. If you want a male protagonist, Wang Ye is good hahaha

Great author! Has it been updated? It's so beautiful that I can't get enough of it [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Is Wang also the male protagonist? It feels so cp-like. The author is great. Please update it soon.

It looks good. The corners of her mouth are raised. I feel really good looking at this.

It's a very novel type, I personally like it, but if you like fighting, please be careful [smile][smile][smile]

It's pretty good, but the heroine's remarks sometimes make me dig my toes into the ground (◦`~´◦)

The author is great, do you know? I have been chasing from storybooks to tomatoes just for this book. I have been following you since the first day you posted it. Is it super wonderfully written? Every time I can't get enough of it, I still have more to say.