Siheyuan: As Long as I'm Alive, No One Can Turn This Place Upside Down

It's pretty good, at least it's a normal courtyard house. Jia Dongxu may have shortcomings, but it's not as bad as some books say. A shrewd person like Yi Zhonghai would choose such a bad person, and no one in the courtyard has ever said anything bad about him!

It's better not to write it down. Everyone is here to see the courtyard. Well, let's straight up treat the uncle. The key is to foresee that someone is coming to kill someone in the middle of the night. Can't he just confront him with a gun or find a few people to ambush him? Do you think it's reasonable to arrest someone directly on charges of murder when the key person is gone? Do you have a witness? Whatever you say is what you say, return a box of cannons, hide them and rob them, let it go, but if someone finds out, why don't you confiscate them? Beijing, do you have a gun license? I don't want to watch it anymore, to be honest. Isn't watching Siheyuan just to see how life is not easy and the parents are short-sighted? Who would expect you to write this leadership dilemma, that leadership dilemma, the whole thing is out of focus, I don't know what you want to express, maybe the author will say something foreshadowing, you might as well forget it, just start it like an assassination by a spy, you can still be a eunuch, it is good for everyone! ! !

Ink marks. What can be explained in two or three sentences is worth several chapters. The plot progresses slowly. The 300,000-word Siheyuan novel can basically cover half of the plot. You can write ten million words with this water technique.

The subject matter is quite good, but I don't know what you want to write about. You are going to be killed by someone, and then you have to keep it a secret. What's wrong? ? ? What shameful thing have you done? Are you really speechless?

No bragging, no slander, if Jia Dongxu had not died, the plot of the TV series would not have happened. Although men and women now value equality, in some aspects, there is a difference between having a man in the family and not having a man in the family.

I feel like the first 30 chapters are okay, but then it gets sidetracked. You have to pay attention to the theme you write about is the family's filial piety in the courtyard. If you write too much about Machiavellianism, it will be too biased.

We were in the hospital at the beginning. The doctor said that he would be discharged in two days, but it turned out that he was still not discharged after 50 or 60 chapters! The author of the plot of Siheyuan changed the setting to a hospital and completed it!

It's boring. I wrote more than 30 chapters for one thing, and I could write 3-4 chapters for a small thing. There were also problems such as typos and missing words. Later, I even got the names of the characters in the play wrong. The names of Yan Bugui and Director Yang are all wrong.

There are quite few articles written about Jia Dongxu, and the content is good and the angle is novel. However, I found that the author only updates it every other day, two chapters at a time, which is not enough to read.

The author needs to be more rigorous in constructing the plot. Plots such as Jia Jia's relatives being exterminated have been made up. From the play, it can be judged that the Jia family does not have these relatives at all. The old Zhang family of Jia Zhang's family should have relatives, but they have no contact, but the old Jia family definitely does not. Among the characters who are generally made out of nothing, they are suitable for the kind of passers-by who travel through the courtyard, and the interpersonal relationships can be made up casually. If you travel through the protagonist group of the courtyard, the editing must conform to the logic of the original play, otherwise it will insult the readers' IQ.