A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: From the Start, I Find an Ancient Mythical Beast

I'm so happy to be in the first place! I really like to read novels about immortality by ordinary people. I have now reached seventeen chapters in this article. Here is a brief comment: This book is based on the ancient times of immortality, so the text should be written in the ancient way, such as (seconds, hours, Arabic numerals, meters) and popular words that appear in the text. For example, you have been waiting for a colleague for two hours. When the colleague comes and says, "I'm sorry, I kept you waiting for an hour." How do you feel? What about the opposite? In order to encourage the author to write carefully, I still give you five stars. Try harder!

The overall plot is pretty good! The specific details of description, cultivation, level breaking, etc. Can be more specific!

This article is well written, with beautiful scenery and real, smooth and logical content. I hope the author will write about Fang Jun going to the divine world, preferably back to Chiwu Continent to establish a sect and finally ascend to the fairy world and the divine world.

I also expressed my opinion on this book, without exaggerating it. I really feel good about it. First of all, the novel itself is remarkable, and the plot is quite good, but it may be the author's first book, and it does not have its own unique writing style. I feel that some of the plots are not very eye-catching in terms of atmosphere and details, which is understandable. In addition, the characters are not outstanding and the depth is not enough. It would be better if the readers can relax and gain some philosophical insights. I hope the author can improve his writing skills in writing and take the novel to a higher level. Secondly, the author wrote the novel carefully and put a lot of effort and effort into this novel. The author was able to reach this point by accident. He worked hard and the author's efforts are obvious to all. Furthermore, the author also constantly sees readers' comments, and answers readers' questions seriously. He also accepts his own problems with an open mind, has a sincere and serious attitude, and has no airs. Basically, you can see his shadow in all book reviews and comments on each chapter, and he is willing to interact with readers. @ Hang Ke Hang The author of this book hopes that you can read it. He also hopes that you can prosper in your writing career and make further progress. He also hopes that you will not forget the original intention of writing, bring happiness to readers, and enrich your own spiritual world as the author. In my spare time, the author looks back at every bit of your past writing, and it must be painful and happy. There have been times of bitterness and incomprehension, but you will also feel gratified to see that readers are seriously appreciating the author of the novel! Readers will also cherish the author's difficulty and perseverance. I believe there will be like-minded readers who will walk with the author to the end! A long comment from a reader who liked the author in his spare time. I must be one of the readers who will accompany the author to the end! If you hang up again, you can hang on to the author. Only if you can make persistent efforts and stick to your original intention will you be able to persevere.

I have read more than 100 chapters, and the overall feeling is pretty good. Regarding immortality novels, my point of view is that the goal is to focus on immortality, and there should be less emotional elements, especially those of love! Of course, friendships and family ties are still advisable to help cultivate your character!

This is such a wonderful book, why is it rated so low? Isn't this better than those stallion stories and useless counterattack stories? Although the protagonist also has low spiritual roots, he is smart, diligent, kind and optimistic, moves forward courageously, and never gives up. Aren't these qualities the basis of success? God rewards those who work hard, and justice lasts forever. Isn't this the positive energy that our society admires? After chasing it for so long, I still feel that it is still unfinished. It is indeed wonderful, the protagonist has distinct characteristics, clear love and hate, and is affectionate and righteous. I just feel that some of the plots are a bit lengthy. For example, the part about recognizing the ancestor and returning to the clan, or the plot about dealing with the third uncle, has written dozens of chapters, which takes up too much space!

It's super beautiful, the plot is reasonable, fascinating, the characters are well-drawn, and the protagonists are from different continents. It's like a picture scroll slowly unfolding in my mind... I stayed up all night reading it, and my eyes were bleeding and I couldn't put it down. The quantity is not only filling, but the quality is also very good. Thank you, the author, for thousands of likes 👍

Not bad! Although the protagonist is very powerful, he cannot be said to be invincible in every realm. I like. It's much better than those novels that constantly jump to higher levels of challenge.

Not bad, relatively delicate, traditional path to immortality

The plot is well written. It's just that the plot is a bit slow when facing spiritual beasts, sometimes even requiring two chapters to describe.