A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: From the Start, I Find an Ancient Mythical Beast

I'm so happy to have taken the top spot! I really enjoy reading cultivation novels with a "mortal cultivation" element. I'm currently on chapter seventeen of this book, so here's a brief review: This book is set in ancient times, so the writing style should reflect that era, including the use of numbers like seconds, hours, Arabic numerals, meters, and common slang.

The overall plot is pretty good! However, some specific details, such as cultivation and breakthroughs, could be more detailed.

This article is well written, with beautiful scenery, and the content is realistic, smooth, and logical. I hope the author will write about Fang Jun going to the God Realm, preferably returning to the Crimson Martial Continent to establish a sect and finally ascending to the Immortal Realm and the God Realm.

I'd also like to share my thoughts on this book. Without exaggeration, I genuinely found it quite good. First, the novel itself is commendable; the plot is quite engaging. However, perhaps because it's the author's first book, it lacks a distinctive writing style. Some scenes lack a particularly striking atmosphere, and the details aren't very vividly portrayed, which is understandable.

Having read over 100 chapters, my overall impression is quite good. My view on cultivation novels is that the focus should be on immortality, with less emphasis on romance, especially love! Of course, friendships and family bonds that contribute to cultivation are still welcome!

This is a truly excellent book, so why is the rating so low? Isn't it better than those harem novels and underdog-to-hero stories? Although the protagonist also has low spiritual roots, his intelligence, diligence, kindness, optimism, courage, and never-give-up spirit are the foundation of success, aren't they?

Superb! The plot is logical and engaging, the characters are well-developed, and the protagonist travels between different continents, like a scroll slowly unfolding in my mind… I read it all night long, my eyes were bloodshot, but I couldn't put it down. It's a large volume, satisfying, and of excellent quality. Thank you, author! Ten thousand thumbs up! 👍

Not bad! The protagonist is very powerful, but he's not invincible at any level. I like it. It's much better than those novels where the protagonist constantly challenges opponents far beyond their level.

Not bad, quite detailed, following the traditional cultivation path.

The plot is well-written. However, the scenes involving spirit beasts are a bit slow, sometimes requiring two chapters to describe them.