I Am Not a Sword Immortal

Written to the author of ChipCran: Why do you only update two chapters in one day? It's not enough to read. I'm quite worried about my sister-in-law's happiness. You don't want readers to see the sadness of being "short and weak"! So, come on, update! ! ! Hurry up and update! Dig drag Pit more No no Bury more Bury more make make who

Okay, I've finished reading. The author will update soon. I have found the feeling I had when looking at leaves. I don't know when Ye Zi's new book will be released. I should wait until you write more before reading [laughter]

This book is quite good. The descriptions of the operations are very detailed. Unlike most novels which are all about writing skills, and there are many updates every day, the rating of six points is unreasonable [Laughing and crying] Although some plots and settings are somewhat similar to the online game novels Butterfly Blue and Lost Leaves...

Yes, remember to change the first person back to the third person

Come on, author, I must finish the book [I'm about to cry]

It's pretty good. The protagonist doesn't level up as fast as other online game protagonists, and his talent doesn't break the balance, but that skill does break the balance a bit. (Currently 101) I always feel that there are some differences between the game and reality. The protagonist's level is about one or two levels different from others, but the process is like two worlds. When fighting, you don't feel crushed. Obviously some people shouldn't be so strong, and the other three ancient martial arts families haven't appeared yet. Only Ye Qingqian appears in the game. Also, that peak showdown was so weird [face covering] And in the story mode, why does it feel like there is only one protagonist? Others don't seem to have any skills, maybe some have hidden professions? But there are no ordinary professions. The existence of the SSS-level talent is a bit small.

This book is well written from the first chapter to the penultimate chapter, but there is a problem with the structure. There are many missing lines and chapters in the middle. If there are no skipped chapters, I think this is a good book (this is my opinion alone. If you have any questions, please comment) [Thinking]

Come on, I think it still looks good.

It's very possible, but Xiaoxiao needs to handle it well, otherwise the single female protagonist will become a harem story. Overall, it's still very good, come on💪 The author can look for a few high-scoring online game novels to read and refer to some places. It does not mean that your writing is not good, but it is just the first time you write it. It will be better if you have more references. I predict that this book will be popular in the future, so give it a try and cheers💪

After watching it for a day, overall it was pretty good.