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It looked good, but at first I thought the main character was Saroo, so I wanted to give it up. Fortunately, I didn't give up. The protagonist just used Cell's cells. He just had two extra horns and a fish tail, referencing the dragon man. The content is pretty good. There are very few Dragon Ball fandoms, but most of them have been edited out. Please read and cherish them!

Not enough, ten poop a day

If the quality of the work continues to remain at the same level, stars will be deducted if it cannot be achieved in the future. There is no need to keep stressing that you want a single female protagonist. After all, it is not easy to travel through time and live the life you want. This is not too much. If you feel that you cannot maintain your own writing level, then forget it.

The author should change it to two female protagonists. Isn't there still a time and space No. 18 That has not been accepted? This way, it will be double happiness [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

[Thinking] The protagonist has the potential of Lu Bu and has the genes of everyone [laughing] [Sneaky laugh] If you want to get fairy beans, you can rely on Shenlong, but there aren't many on the tower at all.

After watching it for so long, I think it's still okay, but that's why the rating is so low. It still feels okay, but can the author be less clumsy? The interaction between the protagonist and No. 18, You can just bash one.

It stands to reason that the protagonist has Frieza's genes. Normally, shouldn't Frieza's genes be stronger than those of Saiyans? [Facepalm] The fusion of these two can easily exceed tens of billions of combat power in one year.

Good looking, good luck to the author

But I am uneducated You can travel all over the world with just one word.

The writing style is good, very good. After all, there are very few people writing about Dragon Ball nowadays. If I write according to this writing style and add some updates in the future, the score will probably not be too low, but I still hope that the author will write in the direction of Dragon Ball Super in the future. After all, I haven't watched Dragon Ball GT. Most people who read anime or fan fiction nowadays usually watch Dragon Ball Super. Moreover, Dragon Ball Super fans generally have higher ratings than Dragon Ball GT fans. At the same time, I hope this book will not be discontinued or unfinished.

Author, you have to update, you have to persevere, it's very interesting, don't give up, as long as you persevere, this book will eventually succeed, don't be unfinished, don't be a eunuch, No You have to persevere, you have to update, it looks great, it looks so good woo woo woo

Very wonderful very wonderful

If No. 18 Continues to be called No. 18, The rating of this book will be much higher.

Not bad, but there are two problems. First, Sun Wukong and the others have always been mortals. They have not reached the second level of life. Even if they transform into super gods with the Self-Extreme Intention Kung Fu, it will be the same. Although they have the aura of gods, they are still mortals in nature. Second, it is even more impossible to become gods. The gods of Dragon Ball can only be gods achieved by rules, such as angels. The God of Rules has his own mission, and there is also the inheritance of the divine throne. It is very difficult to become a god. The protagonist can become a god in addition to the power of the Dragon God, and his special situation. The heroine can also be regarded as inheriting the divine throne. Gods like Douluo inherit, so Sun Wukong and the others cannot become gods. Vegeta will also inherit the divine throne of destruction!

Not bad. It's interesting. Come on.

I think you should change your tail to a Saiyan tail! [Pinch][pinch][pinch][pinch]

Okay, okay, it looks good, but what the hell are you doing every day?

It's okay, but I feel like I forgot about the protagonist's Kaioken when fighting Cell. The protagonist's combat power is over 170 billion. If you add 50 times Kaioken, that's 35 trillion. Cell with 150 billion is not enough [laughter]

Okay, there are just over 50 chapters and there are over 900 updates. Don't stop.

"Traveling through the Rebirth of Guangdong Province - My family has a hundred acres of land, and there are 20 houses waiting for me to collect rent" 🌝

It's not bad. It's worth checking out. It's just that there are a few updates.

The daily descriptions are pretty good, but the protagonist's battle scenes are described a bit too quickly (could this be to highlight the protagonist's extraordinary strength?). [Laugh]

It's not bad. Dragon Ball is still relatively new, but maybe I care too much about combat power data, so the writing process was a bit tangled. I read a book called Dragon Ball Ayaba Legend written by Eternal Seraph many years ago. I feel that the setting is also novel. It seems that he is the main writer of Dragon Ball, but the protagonist is a female [laughter]

With the genes of Goku and Vegeta, at least the talent is equal to that of Gogeta [Start]

The single heroine is pretty good, come on! ! !

Ouch, that's good. What are you doing? Ouch, can you give me some lychees? Hurry up and write.

This book is very good, I don't know why it has such a low rating.

The sky in July is clear even at dusk, crisp blue with burning clouds, the air enters the chest smoothly, and the breath carries the aftertaste of the sky. ——Zhang Jiajia

There is nothing wrong with the work, but it feels like the combat power has increased too quickly. In less than a hundred chapters, the normal combat power is already 1.7 Billion, not counting the transformation [laughter and cry][laughter and cry][laughter and cry]

Pretty good. This is the best Dragon Ball novel I have ever read. The plot is exciting, reasonable, and well-founded, and it reads smoothly. Although there are still some flaws in it, everyone has their own interpretation of combat power. I disagree. I wanted to give you a six⭐ praise, but I'm afraid you will be proud, so I can only give you a five⭐ first. Don't be proud. I'll update it soon. I'll wait for you🤙🤙🤙(˵¯͒¯͒˵)