One Piece: Bring a Healer When You Go Out to Fight

It's good-looking. It's rare to see something that doesn't follow the boat and doesn't follow the plot. Where have you been? Come back soon for updates

I really like it. It's not just following the crowd. It has its own story development without too much interference from the original plot. It's not that the original plot is bad, but I've seen too many plot-related ones, and it feels very novel to see this. [Ask for more updates][Top post]

This is the first Pirates fanfic I've read from beginning to end (downloaded to). To be honest, it's really great. 1. The main CP character is well designed and super sweet In the early stage, Bai Su's character design was like an innocent, timid and unexpected wet nurse. In the later stage, she was an elegant legal assistant who built a peaceful society in the pirate world, but she was still a bit dull (especially in terms of emotions). Xiaobai and Ace, two contestants who have been flirting with each other for a long time, really made me feel like I felt when I read romance novels in my early years (there are so many exciting moments). Every kiss made me do sit-ups with excitement. Oh, you two, hurry up and confirm the relationship for me! ! 2. Bold world view and interesting plot The world view of European gods added by the author is well integrated with the original world view of the OP. It does not follow the same rules and the plot is smooth. It's more of a growth story. The protagonist slowly discovers his life experience after time travel, slowly adds to the worldview, and gradually becomes stronger. It doesn't deviate too much from Ace's personal line, but the ending of Blackbeard's episode will definitely change, which is a pity after all. 3. Emotions are smooth and sincere, joyful and non-ooc There are no uncomfortable emotional twists, and neither the CP nor everyone is particularly OOC and they all surround Xiaobai from the beginning. Xiaobai is also recognized by everyone through his own special points. He has a natural and silly attribute but hides a little dark side (...) 4. There is no transitional golden finger or super powerful system. You can explore your own super abilities by yourself, which looks more enjoyable. Although there is a system, it serves as a decoration. Wu is super strong from the beginning, stronger than the protagonist's golden finger. Uncertain later. Xiaobai is (supposedly) a descendant of the mountain god and has the ability to heal and make plants grow. 5. Good writing style The article is not muddled, the emotional description is delicate and does not drag him down, and the characters' reactions are real. Stand out from the crowd of novices, you are Simba! ! (Mist) Burns when it is burning, sweet when it is sweet. The characters have their own characteristics, and the relationship between Xiaobai and Ace really has a sense of cliché. The conflict between the peace that the protagonist lives in the real world and the chaos and corruption in the pirate world is well written, so that it looks very real. Finally: Welcome everyone to read the article together! ! Such a good article, so few people read it, it's really (｀へ´)=3 Also: I hope the author can write more about Xiaobai's infrastructure attributes, which is very charming as a character! !

It looks great, but the author is great. Why are you missing again? Wei Chen has been searching hard for you for nearly several months, but there is still no trace of you. Wei Chen's life is miserable.

I like this kind of independence and not being in a group with the protagonist. Xiaobai and Ace are so sweet. I hope Ace has a different ending. Come on soon! ! !

I like it. It's pretty good among the Pirates fics I've read, but Novice is a bit miserable every time he fights [face covering] In addition, Novice and Ace are very sweet [shy]

Very well written. The plot develops naturally and warmly. Their relationship came naturally and did not develop as suddenly as in some novels. The development of the story is not dull, and it is not boring to watch. I hope that when the protagonists get together, they will not just write about their feelings, but also add some ups and downs to the plot, which is both exciting and plain and heartwarming.

Must be five stars! It's so beautifully written! Why only 7 points! The characters are great, and the plot setting is great. It really captures what I think of Ace and his wife. Please add more! Not enough to watch woo woo woo woo! More updates! !

Really like this article! ! ! ! ! Watching the heroine grow up little by little, watching the heroine's evaluation from being the best female crew member to becoming a "witch" that others are afraid of, watching the heroine becoming stronger and stronger little by little. Really, the main protagonists in the One Piece novels I have seen are all brainless and strong, and they are basically the same as Luffy and the others. I rarely see it with Ace. I read a lot of novels where the protagonist crushes everyone and no one is better than the protagonist. It is really rare for the protagonist to grow up little by little. I didn't dare to read it after reading more than 120 chapters because I was afraid that I would end up crying [almost crying]. I really liked it! ! ! The author will update it soon! I can't stand the others, I really like it! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

This book fits all my fantasies as a person who has never seen One Piece but knows a little about One Piece. I really like the author's wife's writing style. Each character's personality is very distinct.