A Half-Ghoul Doctor in the Detective Conan World

I quite like the current development direction. The relief direction is a bit too much, and the black and residual depth is also good. The author can just follow his own pace. There are just a few minor problems. I wish I could control the psychological analysis and description a little bit. For example, I really wanted to skip the agave part. It can be seen that the author is trying hard to follow the logic of the original work and make the characters and events develop more reasonably. Well, it's just that the protagonists, as fans, are not so attractive as characters. Of course, the setting of the protagonist is still very good. It's not easy to eat a mouthful of Dongguo's food. I will see the end [full] [full] Progress Chapter 179, I feel a little tired. The role of the protagonist seems to have been drastically reduced, and the long narration seems to be reading the plot synopsis of the original Conan, forcing a character into it to describe the psychological changes of others. The main line is blurred, and I don't know what to do after taking out all the lunch boxes. It's just that the initial imagination no longer reflects the meaning of the setting. I don't know whether the author followed the video to copy the script or how to write it. Does he just want perfect attendance? I feel that I have always been relatively tolerant towards my fellow fans. Regardless of whether I make money or not, I always have the original intention of generating energy for love. If the writing is not good, I will understand it and stop reading it. This is a book that I left a message to follow to the end, otherwise I wouldn't be bothered to put this typing for a long time. We understand that the author said he is in a bad state and wants to be black and can deep, but he still has to write hard when he is not in a good state all the time. Why can't he slow down and polish it more carefully? Of course, if you are pure and pure and want to eat Quanqin, just pretend that I didn't say it. I'll hang it on the bookshelf like this for now, and I'll look at it when it's finished.

Nice! Updates are stable! Jingguang survives, the protagonist is Leziren, Dagou, travels through Mingke and Heihu, and knows the general plot. Nice! Recommend! ! ! [Like][Love] Good looking and recommended!

It's so well written. It's the first time I've seen the two worlds merge together. It's very self-consistent and smooth. The later plot completely ruined the good impression in the early stage, it was a complete mess! ! The author was very anxious to finish and went straight to the outline. In the previous article, Zhu Fu Jingguang was saved and threatened with various transformations, thinking that he could come up with new tricks. However, the old routine, the classic plot of the redemption story, was repeated again and again... Another person who thought that his life was too easy and made it more difficult for himself. He was stabbed in the back by Jingguang in various ways. Matsuda was also very annoying. Don't look at the back of the main control. Only fans of the police academy group will like these plots.

It's pretty good in Tomato. At least it's not Conan's conventional beauty, strength, misery, and fun. People who read the original novel didn't feel that the character design was that bad, but it was a bit boring based on the original case. (The above questions are asked because it is difficult to find good books on Tomato, and I have read too many fans) (Please don't stop updating. There are many fans with popular routines, but I haven't seen this type in a long time) A little bit of bad finishing is acceptable (it's just a pity)

I feel like it would be better not to save Jingguang. I am the protagonist, and I feel that Jingguang is dangerous, and he is not completely loyal to the protagonist. And he has his own social circle, which is scary, okay? But he knows the protagonist's secret. Sometimes not. Only when you say it can people know it. If you don't say it, people might guess it. I'm so afraid that he will threaten the protagonist.

It's very interesting, with a lot of personal emotions, but the author seems to be very miserable in reality. He was a good, truthful, and beautiful person, but he turned into a black and miserable person.

I think it's very good. The ending is hasty but it can't be said to be a failure. There are also reasons for the rescue of the police academy team and others. If you look carefully, the protagonist's character traits are very prominent and his weaknesses are also obvious. He has his own emotional judgment and is consistent with a real person rather than the invincible, strong and cool protagonist that most Ke Tong pursues. The whole book is a Ke Tong with a relatively complete story line, and it can be ranked in the middle or upper position.

Is there some plot in 47 and 48?

I don't know which chapter the first 48 is, but the second 48 is the original 48 chapters. 49＝69…50＝70 51＝71…52＝72 53＝73…54＝74 55＝75…56＝76 57＝77…58＝79 59＝79…60＝80 61＝81…62＝82 It gave me a headache, just seeing this

Super exciting, I love watching it anyway, please give it a thumbs up, author