Dating in the World of Classic Literature

Recommend the world of Pride and Prejudice! ! The character of Mr. Darcy is well grasped! Pan Jinlian's world seems a bit oily to Wu Song, but it is undeniable that the author still has some skills in writing and description. I am not very satisfied with this world. There are some logical loopholes, which may be due to the author's own mistakes.) There are some places where the preface does not match the postscript, mainly because of the contradictions in some plots and the strong additions. Pan Jinlian's world is not recommended. The writing of Pride and Prejudice is still good, but there are also some plots that are very blunt. I hope the author can revise the text.

It's really exciting! ! ! It broke the previous somewhat tragic plot and gave the supporting characters delicate and full characters, especially Wu Dalang's self-narration, which made me feel that Wu Dalang's image is more vivid. He is not just a simple and dull idiot. He has his own thoughts and clear ideas about his own destiny. Perhaps it was after Wu Dalang hesitated for one night that he decided to propose marriage that I suddenly felt that he had made an unexpected and unexpected decision. Only when I expected it did I realize that Wu Dalang has been changing and slowly jumped out of the whirlpool of doom. A book describes the protagonist's life as much as possible and ignores supporting characters, such as dispensable NPCs. However, the rich characters in the supporting characters make the world in the book more real, allowing readers to be more immersed in the author's world, and feel the character characteristics and the world in the book more delicately. The author is great! ! ! Please keep up the good work! ! !

Why is the author so slow to update? I've been waiting for several weeks, and I've just finished the high school entrance exam, and only updated two chapters [I'm about to cry]! ? I'm going crazy! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry][please update]

It's really nice. The author's writing style is very good. He has a good grasp of the characters and the plot. He seems to have a profound literary background. I love it so much [love]. Os: Don't be passive at work, the baby is crying ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू )~ We can see his growth from the large articles. Maybe the first one is a little illogical, but the later articles are really good [I learned it]. Os: write quickly write quickly

I like Pride and Prejudice but hate Lydia. I can accept any woman wearing it, but Lydia can't accept it at all. I cried to death [almost cried]. Darcy also collapsed, but writing a book is not easy, so go for it, author. [Working on draft] Give me a good review

It's very good. The language and expressions are very European and classical. The heroine is not stupid and sweet. There is no slander against anyone in the Bennet family. Everyone has their own perfect life. It makes up for all the regrets and hidden problems in the relationship of the original work.

The author's writing is very beautiful, the writing style is good, the three views are correct, the emotions develop naturally, the scenery is colorful, and the characters are real and vivid. Except for the update speed, all five points are positive.

The writing is warm, but there are many bugs. The author can't distinguish between Western surnames and first names (for example, Bentley is a surname, and the first name is Charles, but it is written as Bentley as a first name, and the names of the people in it are all the same), and even the surnames are changed. For example, Darcy's surname is not a given name, but the author changed it to William. The annual income of Bentley and Darcy changes back and forth, which is very confusing. , Bentley's annual income increased from 5,000 to 10,000, Darcy's income increased from 10,000 to 5,000, and then to 40,000 [face covering] [face covering] Also, Darcy is not an aristocrat, but a big landowner. Generally speaking, there are no problems, but there are many small bugs. The author will not read or modify the readers' comments, but the article is well written and beautiful [laughing] I only read the second world (Pride and Prejudice), and suddenly I remembered that there was a big surprise in the beginning of this article. In the early stage, the heroine passed through the book, and some plots were lost. However, the heroine was inexplicably full of malice towards Darcy because of the original plot. The ball where Darcy and Elizabeth first met, because Arguments over views on things have occurred. The butterfly has fallen out here. Darcy has not said a word to the original heroine, but he has spoken to the heroine quite a lot. Darcy has not even talked about Mrs. Bennet like in the original work, but the heroine has preconceived ideas (from the perspective of the original work) and started to criticize Darcy. The Darcy here has It's a bit miserable. Inexplicably, the heroine is acting out Pride and Prejudice in Pride and Prejudice [laughing] Also, the distance from London is not the same. It would take three days from the evening of the same day (when I went to buy a machine with Mr. Bennett) to two days, but I wrote the letter very quickly. It was sent to the heroine in the afternoon of the same day, and the original heroine, first said she was going to London to play with Miss Jin, then it turned into going to France for further study, then it turned into going to France to go to school, and then it turned into taking classes in a London church [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] Anyway, it is very messy, but the writing is really good

It's a very well-written article, and the analysis of human nature is quite thorough. However, I don't really like the heroine's personality. It's too dragging and contradictory. I hope the heroine will be more cruel or straightforward in the future.

It looks good, the writing is not average, and the content is close to the original work. It can be seen that the author has really read these masterpieces seriously and likes them, but they are not suitable for those of us who like plain texts. If you like reading classics, you can't miss it