I Transmigrated into the Deranged First Senior Brother Who Imprisons the Male Lead

I don't want to read too many chapters, and I don't want to read too short. About a hundred chapters is enough. It's hard to read one that's not finished yet, and it's heartbreaking😣

1. Just looking at the first half or the overall framework, the concept and design are quite good and very attractive. 2. I just don't know why this relationship line is always a bit baffling to me. In the words of a sister in the comment area, it is the relationship line between the two of them. There is only emotion and no line. It is very sudden and there is no process at all. It does not mean that the process is short, but he did not even mention it. At this point, it just doesn't exist. As a result, when I look at the changes and deepening of the protagonist's feelings later, I always feel a sense of trance [face covering] [face covering]. That is to say, there is neither the kind of deep love that lasts for a long time, nor the kind of amazing love at first sight. Anyway, this feeling will be inexplicable. 3. Generally speaking, except for the love line, which is relatively blunt, the other plot arrangements are still very good and exciting. To put it simply, it is a very good fairy tale (that is, except for the love line to spawn monsters and fight bosses, it has everything [face covering]). However, the advancement of the love line still needs to be strengthened, otherwise it will really affect the perception. I have questions in my mind after reading it. Overall, I am still looking forward to the new work of DaDa. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Why doesn't anyone comment? It's very beautiful. The only drawback is that it's not finished [almost crying]

Lan Yinxuguo is probably the most suitable word to describe this story. Every encounter is God's best arrangement. There is a kind of fate that lasts forever. (Actually, this is my first time reading a novel from a first-person perspective. I was a little uncomfortable at first, but the more I read the later, the better it became. Without the reader's God's perspective, I can better experience Yu Li's feelings.) It's great! I like it very much. Although the book is finished, the story of Yu Li and Duan Qianyue is not over yet. Their meeting in the real world will definitely be another enviable love...

Evaluating this book, the author has a lot of imagination, and the supporting characters in the book do not exist for the protagonist. Each supporting character has his own character, not an NPC in the story line. I still remember Ayun's silent protection, Xiao Wu's unspoken words of love, Uncle Lei's fireworks shop, and the aunt of the Lord of the City. Many supporting characters have flesh and blood and their own souls. The only thing is that I feel that many story situations develop too fast, as if someone has pressed the fast forward button. Everything that should be included is included. The occasional slow pace can give people a chance to chew slowly, and then they will have emotional resonance.

So shocking! This novel is truly magical. I stayed up late to read the second half. The early plot is ordinary and dull, but it is also attractive. At least the plot is compact and one thing after another is fascinating. Everyone can know about the inexplicable love that the male protagonist has for the book wearer in the extra story. There are a lot of foreshadowings. You may be confused or confused about many things in the early stage. You may even feel that the character design of the big brother is not very good, and the attack and attack have the least sense of CP. Various events in the later stage will help you clear up your doubts one by one. Especially in the chapters near the end, you may not be able to tell whether it is a dream or reality. Just remember the little girl's original words and you will know. Dreams are the key. Dreams contain things from the past and the future, and they can also explain many doubts. Then there are other people like Xiaowu, Demon King, Ayun, etc. Who like the senior brother, and it is indeed difficult to reconcile, but everyone can just stumbling in the early stage, and the rightful position will never fall. Maybe the writing style is slightly lacking, but the plot arrangement is really superb and amazing! It's a revelation! This is why I praised it so much in the first sentence. It's really great. I'm going to read the author's other works! I forgot that I wanted to follow it again, because the author I follow must have a certain work that deeply attracted me.

It would have been better without this side story. I originally thought it was a two-way trip. After reading the extra story, it seems that Duan Qianyue just likes Yu Li or doesn't understand love. She only likes Yu Li because it is his calamity. It feels unworthy of Yu Li's affection. I was so moved, and it was completely ruined when I saw the extra episode [crying]

If you like it, you just like it! No explanation needed!

The plot, writing, and characters are all excellent. If I have to use one word to describe the plot style, I can only think of "indifferent". Is there a very peaceful beauty? Just like a moonlit night, a cool breeze, a quiet lake, a small boat, and a cup of sake. The whole article gave me such an image. The only drawback is the writing, which is also very bland. It just makes people feel that this writing style is very suitable for cultivating immortals, but not very suitable for cultivating immortals. The feeling of being quiet and independent from the world is very suitable for cultivating immortality. But after "quiet", I had almost no deep insights into the fight between humans, immortals and demons. That senior sister Biyi died, and Shou stabbed Tang with a dagger. I didn't see any description or description that shocked me, so my first reaction was "Oh, he stabbed me." It made me read it very blandly. But overall it's still very good. It's hard for me to comment on the good parts because I read it too quickly. After watching it, I felt it was very good. The only things that left an impression on me were the dissatisfaction (personal character). If you want to know what the advantages are, you can read other people's comments.

Each book is written by the author with great effort. It is well written and very attractive, but I think the emotions of the protagonists are a bit inexplicable (personal opinion [I almost cried]), but the writing is good [Adoration]