Football: At Manchester United, Every Shot Is a Goal

The subject matter is okay and has highlights. Two points should be noted. One is Ronaldo's problem. Don't get caught up in it. He is arrogant and arrogant if he succeeds, and he is arrogant and eccentric if he fails. He is just a child who has not grown up, and his personality is like that. Everyone can see his reputation; second, there is a slight problem with the writing, especially the commentary and game content. There is no passion and immersive feeling. I suggest you read other football articles to see how they are written. In addition, you can also write about the performance of teammates, daily life with teammates, and the attitude and psychological changes of the protagonist. However, one thing is that the heroine should not be too outrageous, or simply don't write about it, because I have read a lot of them and can't write about the heroine. Football is iron-blooded, romantic, and a hymn to heroes. I hope you can write better. Reba is so disgusting to me, the poison test is over, I want to say goodbye

Author, please stop resting, one update a day is too few! I'm so impressed with you, you idiot! But what you wrote is the most authentic and the most authentic European football environment. It is much better than those "stadium saints" who score hat tricks every time and never foul on the pitch! The main theme is a truth, and other novels are completely like science fiction movies, with hat tricks and big fours every time! Really, I don't even dare to have a sense of empathy! A performance that could last a lifetime for Ibrahimovic! It scares me to see it! This novel is the most realistic version of European football! Who is not young and frivolous at the age of 18? Who among you here has never been in love more than twice? I never expected that so many people would criticize me for being in love! Not to mention that most of them are just hype! Who among celebrities doesn't make hype? This is the most real world! If you were 18 years old and had such achievements, you would be better than him! Those feminist monsters with single female protagonists, go and live your childhood dreams! The stadium doesn't need saints! All it takes is strength!

I have been a fan of Manchester United for 22 years and I feel pretty good about it, but I think the writing is too strong.

Come on, come on, work hard

Invincible, anything is fine as long as you don't join the national football team.

Systematic but not very present, and I don't always wear hats. It suits my taste and I don't like overly exaggerated things.

It's good. We can add some scenes for Ma Kui. We can make Ma Kui more funny and manly. We can also add some scenes for Fat Tiger and Big Brother De Gea. Don't use long descriptions for women's scenes.

I actually finished reading this book.

How should I put it? To be precise, this novel is suitable for publication and not suitable for viewing on the Internet in the form of a fast food. The author is very thoughtful and the writing is more realistic. However, if it is really published, the author's writing power is obviously not enough. The future is promising, keep up the good work!

So far, I think it's well written, please give it a try, author. Come on come on.