Quick Transmigration: A Jade-Like Beauty

This comment is a lightning protection post Point 1: The author may be a newcomer, so his writing style is not very good, and the article does not have a sense of empathy. Well, the sense of penetration I am talking about does not mean that it is from the perspective of the heroine, but that even the sense of God's perspective is not very good. It doesn't feel like I'm reading a novel, but rather an outline (it's better to look at it from the second world, the first world is really weird, it really looks like an unoptimized outline) Point 2: Be careful with the Double Clean Party. Well, after looking at a few positions, I just can't feel it. Is it 1v-1? I'm probably not thinking of it, right? But well, the first aspect is easier to accept, at least I just liked the original heroine and was not with the original heroine, but the second aspect is that I am unclean both physically and mentally. The above is only my personal opinion and is for reference only Finally, cheers to the author, cheers (ง•̀_•́)ง, take your time, you will definitely write better⊙▽⊙

Shamelessly click on five stars (cover your face [make a face]) I'm really looking forward to it when I reach 80,000 words [lick the screen] (I don't know when this was written, I won't delete it, just keep it as a souvenir, the key points are below) The following text was written on 2023.3.13 21:00 I read everyone's book reviews, chapter reviews, paragraph reviews, and the messages where the author has something to say. I was able to reply to them one by one when I had time a few days ago. Recently, I have been too busy and there are a lot of comments, so I won't reply to them one by one, but I still read them. There must be shortcomings, and everyone's wishes must be many, and I will learn from them. I will read every comment carefully. This is my first book, and I am learning everything. This book contains too many subjective thoughts of my own. I originally wanted to "write the story I want to write," but after reading so many comments, I feel that I am a little selfish. When writing novels, I must take everyone's needs and feelings into consideration. This second world does have more problems. Everyone's character is not perfect, and it cannot be said that it is not perfect. There is no perfect person. It should be said that everyone has flaws and these flaws are very serious. I know it myself, but I still wrote it. After reading everyone's comments, I thought about marking these problems on the introduction, but still didn't. It doesn't matter whether it is a good review or not, and it doesn't matter whether it is a bad review or not. It's fun to read the text and pictures. Some people still like these stories. If reading these stories makes you feel unhappy or unhappy, I apologize [crying] [crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] I'm really sorry! Now that I have written so much, it is impossible to revise the article [thinking] [thinking] too tired [laughing and crying] [crying] [laughing and crying] I will still try my best to write the following stories well and live up to the expectations of existing fans and readers [love] [love]

"Loving yourself is the beginning of romance." "Loving someone is an uncontrollable passion when you see him in your eyes and in your heart, and think about him in everything you think about." "He met Song Tingyu, who he was regarded as a gift from fate." "Like is unrestrained, love is restrained, meeting is reserved, but getting along is patient." "I like you, and I promise, my liking will grow stronger day by day - until I fall in love with you." "There is a bright moon named Yu Qin in my heart. I have never attempted to possess her, but I long for me to catch up with her footsteps and even stand side by side with her at the same height." "I never expected to be able to be with her." "He is neither gentle nor gentle, but he clearly knows that the moment he sees her, he wants to give her all his true tenderness." "Before meeting her, he didn't know how to define gentleness; after meeting her, he knew." "The definition of gentleness is that I can't tolerate anyone else except you. I may not be gentle, but I will do my best for you." "She was looking at the birds, and he was looking at her looking at the birds." [The ending came unexpectedly, but it's not bad]

I have finished watching the first world. It is very sweet and warm, just like a fairy tale. No mess. But the plot is too little, the writing is generally a bit pale, the setting is good, and you can watch it. Come on! After reading Two Worlds, I was ready to abandon the article. The advantage is that the setting is very good, the title is neat, and the whole story is relatively sweet. The shortcomings are indeed very clear, the logic is also a bit problematic, and it is not very attractive. A lot of people were concerned about the uncleanness, but I was fine with it, but the problem was that I felt that the process of falling in love with the heroine was too fast and seemed very thin. I don't know what the author's definition of this article is. If it's a redemption strategy article, I can enrich the plot of getting along with the male protagonist. If it's a scumbag article, I can improve the logic. In short, add some attractive plots. Well, that's it, best wishes

It's good-looking and recommended by old bookworms. I like the whole tone very much! None of those ridiculous things! Except the original text! The male and female protagonists are made for each other! Very sweet, very sweet, very sweet, really good! Be tolerant, it's very good for a new author to write to this level!

The writing style is very good, and the story is also very novel and interesting. However, the sudden ending was a bit unexpected. I thought there would be a story about returning to heaven after the end, but in the end, it ended. It felt like it was stuck in the middle and disappeared. It was really awkward😂

2023.8.2.9：55 Although the writing style is immature, I felt a sense of warmth from the book. Everything happened slowly, plainly and joyfully. Looking forward to the author's progress I think some of the words are quite reasonable. "Don't think too much." Lin Xizhi interrupted her thinking, "Never speculate on things that haven't happened yet. What we should care about is the present." When wealth reaches a certain level, it is an obligation, not just a right. …

Come on! Come on! I have read the entire novel and there is not a single chapter left. I really like the idea of ​​loving yourself first before loving others. In fact, I have a little bit of a Shuangjie complex. But in the author's article, I don't know why, but it's quite normal to suddenly feel unclean. Because they treat every relationship with sincerity and enthusiasm, that's why their encounter is so beautiful!

It's really good to watch. One of the reasons for giving four stars to The Second World is (probably) the male protagonist is not good enough for Song Tingyu, which makes me feel frustrated. The other reason is that the ending is too sudden and I didn't watch enough [crazy] But the author really writes the gentleness of some male protagonists very well, and the plots in each world progress very quickly without any delay. [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] Looking forward to the author's new book [Blowing a kiss] [Blowing a kiss] [Blowing a kiss] [Blowing a kiss]

It's okay, but I hate that some male protagonists in the world are unclean. I am curious whether the heroine is seizing the body or having a deal with the original owner. If it is a deal with the original owner, I don't see what the original owner needs the heroine to accomplish.