Love Begins in Korean Showbiz

Tomato is one of the few Korean entertainment novels that I can watch. The writing is good, but the characterization could be more delicate. Years are gone, the second-generation girl group is coming to an end, and with it, Korean entertainment is also approaching dusk. Maybe there will be new people and new groups in the future to re-create the prosperous era. As a nostalgic party who has basically no understanding of the new generation, I can only remember these ruins. To borrow a sentence, there is no Korean entertainment in the world. There are more people who write about Korean entertainment. But I no longer have the same feeling as chasing after SNSD, Crown, and Function. My Korean entertainment is dead after all.

It's generally good, and it seems to be the author's first book, so I'll give you some suggestions. First of all, I personally feel that the proportion of commercial plots is too high. According to rough statistics, almost every chapter involves some commercial plot. In fact, to put it bluntly, the male protagonist's career line still prefers the setting of cheating and bringing his own money printing factory, which makes the overall career line too bland. Shopping malls should be like battlefields. If you can't grasp this well, I would like to suggest that you should consider downplaying this part of the plot. Secondly, after reading, I feel that the connection and transition between chapters are a bit abrupt. Many plots are still at the stage where they can be further explored and described in detail, but they are suddenly taken away in one stroke, and then suddenly change the scene and start describing a new section of content. This has a relatively obvious sense of fragmentation when reading. It is recommended that one chapter focus on depicting the story of a time period. If a time span must be involved, it is best to add some descriptions of connecting paragraphs to reduce the reader's sense of jumping. Finally, the core of this type of book is actually the emotional line. There is no special development in this aspect yet, so I won't comment on it yet. I hope the author can focus on the pen and ink to portray the emotional line well. If you want to be abused, please abuse it lightly. If you want to be sweet, please be sweet. Overall, I am very optimistic about this book, keep it up!

It's pretty good. Can I write a book about Taeyeon?

The ending is pretty good overall. The author's ability to write "Love Power" to this extent is actually quite impressive, there is nothing toxic about it, and it has a single female protagonist. But I still want to say that the plot is still a bit bland, the character descriptions are still lacking, and there are some other unrelated chapters interspersed in the middle, which is a bit like a running account, so I started skipping chapters after reading it [laughs awkwardly]. This is for the author's reference only, and I hope to keep up the good work!

The most taboo thing in the world is to be perfect. Look at the moon in the sky. Once it is full, it will soon become tired of it. Once the fruit on the tree is ripe, it will fall immediately. There must always be something lacking in everything to be able to persevere. ——Mo Yan

It's like a love letter in a dream, why didn't I see it earlier! The details are all written very well. It can be seen that the author is very attentive to understanding Girls' Generation. Come on, keep writing. It's not enough. 🤤🤤

Give it a good review, I hope you don't want to be a eunuch. But there are so few people reading this book, will they suddenly disappear?

Very good... Who is the heroine?

Come on, look forward to the exciting follow-up!

Yes, yes, yes, but, I watched it for hours and I don't know who the heroine is [what]