The Peerless Alchemist: The Female Side Character Only Wants to Build Her Career

My writer's assistant can't see the comments. I just downloaded the old version. Thank you everyone. I have written a female mystery again. If you are interested, you can take a look. There should be some small progress [Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript]

I also like this novel, but I want to know Su He's true identity even more. It's very interesting. The author, please don't abandon the article... I don't want to stop updating after reading it.

I don't like the narrative techniques very much. For example, the part where the heroine is led into a prophecy by Lu, I felt that it was written too much and too carefully. It was not really written in the first place. It was just to show a possibility of the future. I wrote a few chapters and it did not bring any other effects. The overall structure of the story is okay, and there are quite a few supporting characters, and I think it can be optimized. You can still read the story

Very nice! ! Great author! Who is the male protagonist?

Recommended. Very nice.

It's worth watching because the heroine was sent to the modern plane by her parents when she was a child, and what came back later seemed to be a soul. I wonder if the body in the Cultivation Continent belongs to the heroine herself, or?

The book is okay, leave a footprint [laughing]

Good, good, good, good, like, like, hi

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's a very nice book, very exciting, but this is the rating, why is it so low?