A Man and a Dog Forgotten by Time

It was very comfortable to read, similar to the one by Ximen Dahei Niu. However, when I changed the map, I felt that the book was too bland and I deleted it. I am looking forward to the development of this one.

It's good to read. The protagonist and Dahei are humorous and the middle two characters are funny. It's easy to read.

It's okay, it's funny, and the plot is okay, but it's a bit confusing to watch. For example, the protagonist wants to return to China but his cultivation level is not enough. The protagonist does not improve his strength, but goes to hunt for treasures and open a tavern. It just seems a bit confusing to me. Of course, it has something to do with the setting. The protagonist can become stronger by eating waste pills and become invincible quickly. The author added a saturation setting to balance it out. What I want to say is that it feels a little out of touch, incoherent, and has no mood setting. Then there is the issue of time. I don't have time for this novel, so I was fascinated by it. For example, when discussing the transfer of Wanxiang Sect to Lingyun Sect, I just said it a second ago, and it feels like it has been merged directly below. There are no ellipses, and there are not a few days later. There is a lot of text, and then it is very sloppy at the end. The title, but I think this is very interesting, but there are many typos, the characters are confusing, and the sentences are not smooth. Overall, this novel is quite funny.

It's really, really beautiful! My favorite is Dahei! I really cried to death when Dahei was sleeping, I even thought it was dead. . . . But it revived later! I felt very good after reading the whole book! Worth a look for everyone! ●v●

Very similar to the immortals of Chen Xun and Ximen Heiniu. There is no conspiracy along the way. There is no villain with cerebral palsy. The immortals are ordinary and warm.

It's full of humor and quite funny. What do you say when it comes to the middle and late stages? Feeling a little tired. Alas, overall it's still very good. I'm looking forward to the next work. If you want to score it, it would be 87 points. Grade b

It's pretty good. The protagonist, one person and one dog, is humorous, but also warm-hearted. He opens a small shop in a human tavern, and enjoys it. After the earth wakes up, he discovers his identity, returns to the earth, and protects the world.

It's not bad for a traditional web article. It's not as exaggerated as a systematic article, but it's too everyday, lacks a little bit of excitement and passion, and is too slow to warm up. It would be better if it could add a little bit of excitement. (You can only check it for yourself, the author can take a look)

I like the simple and straightforward beginning, but later on I have bonds, such as saving the common people, and raising a daughter. I don't like it. The protagonist's characteristic is immortality. He does not need to cultivate immortality in order to seek immortality, and he is not bound by the laws of heaven. He can do what he wants, help mortals, open restaurants, open amusement parks, and open zoos. He can do whatever he wants and do whatever he wants.

It looks great, but there are some details that need to be worked out. If you look at it normally, you may need to look for details in the middle.