He Cried After We Broke Up Over His Obsession

I really like unit novels like this, one story and one protagonist! ! ! ! The story is relatively compact, but it doesn't feel complete. The plot is not full, but it is quite enjoyable to watch. My favorite is the one about "Killing My Boyfriend". I think this tension is great. The heroine chapter, because I didn't like the heroine's behavior in the beginning and found it very baffling, so I skipped it directly. Anyway! ! Highly recommended! ! It's not too long and I can read it in one afternoon. I like it.

It's good-looking, and the settings are very interesting. I can see that the author is a person with great ideas and imagination. I like the plot and plot, but the pace is too fast. Try to slow down and write the next story without rushing to complete it. It may be better! There is no problem with the writing and plot, the main thing is that the rhythm and details need to be controlled! Finally, I hope that the part where the male protagonist redeems the female protagonist can be written in more detail. Many times, the female protagonist redeems the male protagonist first, and then when the female protagonist encounters trouble... The male protagonist emmm mentions it [almost crying] [almost crying] and the female protagonist can't stand it. Alas, if the two-way redemption goes in both directions, the contribution of either party should not be omitted.

The author's imagination is so great! Many settings are unique, I love them! [Adoration]

How can I put it? The writing style of DaDa is still very immature, but because it is a short story, the plot is very interesting and very good. (Personally, I think) because many places do need to be improved and are not smooth, but it is really good. Read it as a short story. The big one reminds me of a private one. If you are interested, you can also read it. It is mainly very short. In fact, each of the more than 70 chapters is very short, and some sections are really okay. I also hope that Da Da can create better stories.

The author is great and writes very well! It's the chapter about God's Heart. The male protagonist takes advantage of the female protagonist, takes half of her heart, and even asks her to be his concubine. In the end, he doesn't abuse the male protagonist (personal opinion). I have some female protagonists, but the author is great and writes very well [like][like][like]

Each article is well written and the plot is in line with my wishes. However, the ending of each article is always short and a bit unfinished. The ending is not very good. I wish I could write more.

Six, it's a niche literature and has been criticized a lot. I couldn't understand it at first but I got used to it. It's a wonderful short story, similar to a unit drama. It's very exciting. (I didn't read the first unit before) The description is very delicate and unique. I like it very much!

I declare that this short article written by this author is my most favorite novel. There is no one who is very good at writing. I really like it. How can I describe it? It is really beautiful. Everyone shows me [angry][angry][angry][angry][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][adoration][adoration][adoration][love][love][love][love][love]

The first time I watched it, it felt strange, but I really loved it.

Super pretty. Several short stories are just a bit short and not enough to read. [Grief] Each short story has different characters, and the different plots are super touching. Some are very sweet, some are sad, some are crazy, very touching, and I love it so much [laughs]