The Fox Spirit's Dream Ends in Ruin

There is an old saying in China, which is that those who wash things, blow (blow) Wei Junjie, I have various instruments of torture under my eyes, I think I will be able to pry open your inventory~ I hope you will not wash your hands, and cooperate with us obediently. If Jiang Zi, both of you don't have to make too much trouble. I can see what I want to see. Yoxi, do you understand?ジャガイモきのおくん@ Rice that loves potatoes

The holy fire is shining, the holy fire is shining brightly, all my disciples, meow meow meow meow!

Is the heroine Mu Chen? If it is, that would be the best! [Admiration] Let's give it a five-star rating and look forward to it. I just don't know how the protagonist will answer. The protagonist has always said that he treats Xiao Chen as his sister, and he may not necessarily agree to marry Mu Chen [crying]. Even if he wants to marry, it will be in the future, right? [What] Fox Demon focuses on the love between humans and demons. The protagonist is a demon and his identity is not revealed. If the heroine is Mu Chen, will she go to Tushan to make a reincarnation and renew her relationship in the future? Will it be written five hundred years later? That would be very exciting! [Top post] I don't want the heroine to be a Tushan fox demon, because there are many such stories. Personally, it's boring, and I'm tired of reading stories about the heroine being a fox demon.

It's very interesting. I think the only drawback is that the main character is too miserable. He is constantly being chased and bullied. He should be a little tougher. Every time he gets hurt, he just smiles and forgets [grievance]

I am the author, I have five stars! ! !

Really, I highly recommend it. Although the writing is not great, it is much better than other Tomato writings. The plot setting is also okay, it's the kind that becomes more interesting the more you watch it. It makes me want to read it but not too much. It doesn't have the feeling of being scratched by a cat but makes you want to watch it. But once it's updated, you feel it's right and you'll watch it (provided you can watch it). As for the plot, it is an ideal plot in which you enter a different world where your cute self becomes a monster (from my own perspective). Let's talk about the rating. In fact, this book is still far away from 5 stars, but as a newly opened book, my senses are pretty good and I don't want him to send it, so I gave it 5 stars. But it does not mean that this book is not worthy of 5 stars. Because this book is currently in the early stages, it is still in the early to mid-term, and it may even be in the early stages. There is still room for improvement. I My suggestion is that you can write 70% of the protagonist's emotional line and 30% of the supporting character's story line. The emotional line and foreshadowing can also be written together. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. I still hope that the author will use 90% of his own ideas when writing. The remaining 10% is the reader's suggestion (you can decide whether it is appropriate). Striving for follow-up will make these 5 stars well-deserved. Secondly, a few final words are that this book may not be liked by everyone, so the main thing is to focus on writing your own (for the author). In terms of choosing this book, it depends on whether it is right for your appetite. If it is not for your taste, I suggest you change the book and there is no need to die (for the reader). The second is the update issue. In fact, I feel Come on, two chapters a day seems okay, but in fact I feel like I only read one chapter [smile] and then the latest chapter. I feel that the author is a little bit want to read, but because the previous plot is not very able to arouse my desire to read the follow-up, I don't feel uncomfortable. It would be very uncomfortable if it was aroused. You said that updating two chapters is the same as updating one chapter. You might as well just say that it would be better to combine it into one chapter [currently working on the draft] (complaint session)

No one has commented, let me give you one first!

Very good, hope it doesn't end badly. I'll give you four stars, I'll give you five stars for fear of making you proud! ! ! Author, are you lying? Think about your past self.

Come on, so Update it! [Angry][angry][angry]

Good looking [blowing kiss] (I don't know how to judge)