Legend of the Twin Sovereigns in Another World

It looks good, but the author wonders if the ending is too sloppy.

It's very nice to watch, the two male protagonists are very interesting, the main CP is natural, but the secondary CP's role is a bit sparse, and the ending is unexpected, and it feels like the ending is sloppy [face covering]

It's not that I don't want to give it full marks, it's mainly that I think it still has a second season. Give me a second season and I will change the rating This book is overall very good. The plot, characters, etc. Are all to my liking. However, the ending is a bit too hasty, and there are still many holes that have not been filled in. This book basically describes the past and present relationship between Gong and Shou, but the subsequent development of the protagonist's life is not explained, including whether Shou's baby father is true or false after returning to the tribe, whether Gong's agreement with the Book of Eternal Times will be completed, whether Gong will take Shou to the demon world, or whether he and Shou will stay in the Phoenix Clan to start the layout. In short, it feels like this plane is over, but the next plane has just begun, giving people the illusion that the first season is over but there is still a second season (if there is, it is not an illusion) Hope there will be a second season

Nice. Although it is rebirth, it is not like ordinary rebirth articles. The story is still very exciting. The main cp is also a matter of course. It's just that there are too few deputy CP scenes, and they're not mentioned at the end. The ending was too rushed, I wanted to watch the fairyland. The Book of Wanshi hasn't given a happy ending yet, and he and the God of War are also having a hard time. But, it's really beautiful

I asked why this book has so few words, not even a million words. It turned out to be an open ending and it ended. Think about it, this wife's other fantasy book has more than 10 million words. Anyway, this lady doesn't know which platform she bought Tomato from. The books are quite good.

The two male protagonists are quite interesting, and it didn't feel rushed, nor did it feel like Madonna. The ending at the end was so unexpected that it caught people off guard [face covering], which is very good [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

It's a very good book, but the ending is so rushed that people are caught off guard [facepalm], but it's still enjoyable to read.

In fact, it's quite good-looking. I thought that in the story about cultivating immortals, the author arranged farming. I thought in the story about farming, the author arranged to cultivate immortality. I thought it was a book about cultivating immortals that was against the way of heaven, but it turned out that the author arranged a book. I thought that in the end he really faced the God Emperor, but the author arranged a sentence and went on to do big things. It was so hard to prevent it🤗 [laughing] After all, I couldn't expect it. I didn't expect it.

Yes, but the ending is hasty. I thought I would see a happy ending for several couples, but it turned out that I was overthinking it.

It's a very nice novel, it's totally worth five stars. But it has a terrible ending. Why don't you continue writing it? Damn it, such a good novel was ruined by the ending [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]