Dream of the Red Chamber: Who Dares Lay a Hand on My Sister?

The five stars promised to the author are given to you. Come on.

As long as the author has ideas, has correct views, and doesn't write blindly, he deserves five stars. Whether reading a book is enjoyable or not depends on whether it suits your taste. If you kill people indiscriminately, all anti-social elements will read it. Normal people still have correct concepts of right and wrong. Come on, author, work hard to code, I will send you electricity [laughs]

It's really good. I quite like the character of the protagonist. It would be better to write more about the protagonist's achievements and accomplishments and less about the love between men and women.

The writing is really good, but there is a small problem, that is, since the protagonist has brought Dahuang Ting, there are very few scenes worth of this force... But the writing is very good! It's just a little bit missing, please update it~

There are no other faults except for the lack of updates. If there were no jumping at the end, it would be a very good Red Mansion fanfic.

5 Points. The character of Baochai set by the author is very interesting. The description of Daiyu is okay, at least at this time Daiyu is still facing Baoyu. I hope the plot of "Yingchun" can be written in a more dramatic way, so I'll collect it together.

Relatively speaking, it's pretty good. I like the single female protagonist, and I also like Baochai and Yishi IKEA. Red Mansion doesn't necessarily have to have multiple female leads. Wouldn't it be nice to help other beauties find a good match? Those who have a harem can only say that they treat them as playthings. As a man, I never believe that a man can fall in love with several women at the same time. Suggestion, I wish there were more emotional scenes, but the writing here is a bit sparse and bland. Baochai and Daiyu are close friends. Even Daiyu, who is sensitive and transparent, thinks that Baochai is good. She just wants to run her own life well, and at the same time, she also helps the people around her within her ability. Such a perfect person is praised in the original book's judgment and the crystal snow in the mountains. If the heroine of the Red Mansion is someone else, it doesn't matter if she has a harem. If she is Baochai, there is no need to have a harem. She is the most perfect wife and deserves to be together for the rest of her life.

The logic of the plot is very complete, and the characters are well-developed. Of course, I still have a suggestion, which is to try to write as little as possible about issues related to the West and religion. After all, there is a big gap between Eastern and Western cultural ideas, and the West is medieval Catholicism. Changes in ideological and cultural changes may cause loopholes in the plot. It is not recommended to write it. On the one hand, it is easy to break the plot, and on the other hand, there may be many people complaining about it. But other aspects are quite good, and it is completely in line with my thoughts on the "Dream of Red Mansions" fan fiction. However, this book has a shortcoming, that is, I couldn't sleep after reading it every night, which made me doze off in the self-study class the next day [cover face][cover face][cover face]

Good luck to the author, the writing is good, but I am afraid of siblings

Come on, author, your writing is very good, don't listen to those nonsense, and just ignore it if you don't read it carefully. Personally, I feel like there are a lot of water friends who want to blackmail you?