The Heart of the Last Dawn

The potential material is set off and filled in very cleverly at first. The cultural level is still high. The use of adjectives is acceptable, but it is not enough to be improved. The deduction of the story has some clues, but there are not many vivid and exciting plots. There are not many links that can attract readers to arouse a sense of expectation. In-depth description, the beginning of the text does not give an in-depth description of the protagonist's life and family, and there is no close-up of the age profile. The beginning of the story seems to be inexplicable, which makes the whole article have no sense of unity. Man, I should use that son instead, "Novel focuses on "details", "reversal", "psychological activity", "depiction", as well as the overall sense of the story and the direction of the story. The most important thing for a novel is the first part and the first few chapters of the main text. A good picture sense, the overall sense of the beginning of the story and the sense of expectation for the reader must have a reversal and be exciting so that the reader will not think of a complicated plot. "First oppose people's hearts and then please them." "A good author must pay attention to details. Each article must be carved carefully. The details are ground out. Each chapter needs to be carefully polished at least a few times until it is vivid yet elegant, inspiring, moving, and dangerous... And the emotional close-up inner monologue must be in place. A novel is like watching a movie. A complete novel is a success!"

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The protagonist of this book is not "Fuyao, Yu Tong", but "Fuyao, Aluo Bai". Because the protagonist's information cannot be modified in the contracted works, there have been changes before and after, which may cause inconvenience to readers. We apologize for your understanding.