From the Start, I Sign In for the Tremor-Tremor Fruit, and the Campus Belle Goes Live

It's alright, but needs improvement.

Five stars for the author

It looks nice, but it's short and weak.

Where's the school beauty? Where is she?

It's gone before I even finished reading it! Author, please update soon! [What][What] What the hell? It's stopped updating already. I thought it was pretty good.

Excellent! Keep it up, author!

Not bad, I heard something good.

Go go go!

Keep it up! I believe in you!

It feels about the same, but the school beauty I wrote about in the early part didn't seem to make much of a difference. She wasn't mentioned again later, so it felt like she was just there to make her presence known.