I Want to Become a Strong One in Armor

The first chapter is wonderfully written. The clash between burning ideals and harsh reality, and the protagonist's unwavering spirit at the end, vividly portray the character. 😢

In a darker world beyond the realm of Shadow Warriors, interwoven with the tragedies and spiritual cores behind various knights, the reflections on ideas closer to reality are excellent. However, the protagonist's ideological shifts could be more natural, without needing to be emphasized in the main text. Adding appropriate transitions and character profiles would also be quite good.

It's great, very good-looking, with a tokusatsu feel and a touch of Japanese anime style. There's a lot of detail, especially in *Blood Blockade Battlefront*, haha. I've caught up to the latest chapter, and I feel the author's narrative has improved a lot.

Why do so many of the comments I see in his work disappear when I click on them? I actually quite like the writing, but you've overdone the plot development. Every so often you start with "many years later," and frankly, I don't know if you can keep going until then 🤦. Also, it gets boring after a while; it just feels tedious.

Yes, not bad. The first chapter introduces the events that happened in the days leading up to the protagonist's death before his transmigration, roughly shaping his character. The following chapters describe the protagonist's experiences in the other world.

Frog Fun, this is so well-written! It feels like watching an anime. I hope it doesn't stop updating.

When you update once, minor flaws are magnified, and the immaturity of your writing is criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the plot's progress is given more attention. When you update three times, small praises begin to emerge, and the number of unread readers starts to decrease.

Five stars for encouragement. To sum it up, the first chapter is great. If it weren't for the reincarnation requirement, it could be considered a short story. However, the later chapters often reveal things about the future, which gave me a strange feeling as a first-time reader. Also, there are too many repetitive statements (settings). It's okay to mention the future, but it gets a bit strange when there are too many.

The first chapter is brilliantly written, juxtaposing reality and ideals, and using tragedy to interpret the core of chivalry. Furthermore, the pacing is excellent; the use of hashtags to break down the story while maintaining a tight connection makes it both logical and easy to understand—a truly refreshing read.

This is really well written; I've found a gem on Tomato. 😢