Starting from Scratch: Building the Strongest Tribe

With all due respect, this is a good book that was delayed by ratings. The protagonist has no system or golden fingers, and only has knowledge that is thousands of years ahead. But these are enough, and any more would be superfluous. I guess the author also means this. The writing style is natural and smooth, and the plot is compact and reasonable. It is the best work among all the original novels I have read. Thank you to the author for his hard work. I will not force the author to update in a hurry. After all, slow work will lead to careful work, and good tea needs to be tasted slowly. I just hope that the author can continue reading at the current pace, not to be unfinished, not to be eunuch, and not to forget the original intention. I will continue to follow new books in the future. Come on, author＾0＾~

The writing is trendy and not procrastinating. However, the social experience is not written in depth enough and needs to be strengthened. For example, Ma Xiao cannot lie down and always rests standing up. There are still some places I forgot. This is purely a personal suggestion, please don't comment!

The book is good, but my only personal suggestion is that the narratives in the book should not be read in vain, and the tone of the book should be too calm. You can inject some life, which is to let more emotions in while surviving. You can mix in some interactions, you can make the audience laugh just by watching Chaplin's actions, and some pleasant plots and tone can make the plot come alive.

Although there are some minor mistakes in the plot, overall I think this is the most impressive of all the novels I have read. I hope the author can do his best to keep writing [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] I support you, come on! Come on! Come on! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

The writing is okay. It's not the kind of mindless writing where seven aunts and eight aunts get together to blast each other. It's worth reading.

The quality of the development path is very good. Of course, there must be shortcomings. After all, no one can write perfectly. Come on, author! I hope you can write to the finale

Well written, keep it up. To my liking.

The novel is good, but now I have encountered a problem. A common problem in this type of novels is that the description of war is unrealistic. It relies entirely on the author's free imagination. This leads to too many flaws, so that the battlefield scenes are distorted. Although the author has written more than 700 chapters, I still recommend that the author consult more historical materials on cold weapon wars, or play the Total War series of games. Remember that when describing the cold weapon war, the lack of some unrealistic micro-manipulation of the protagonist would make it look too dramatic.

The best original article I've seen on Tomato so far🤣🤣

The author uses the theme of time travel to construct his own utopia in the context of ancient times. It is a perfect social form with orderly hierarchy, complete systems, simple folk customs, and living and working in peace and contentment. It is fascinating to read and can also trigger reflection on various social problems in reality. The novel is interspersed with descriptions of the history of human ancestors such as Xuanyuan, Shennong, and Chiyou in ancient times. It includes both original historical descriptions and creations based on the needs of the plot development of the novel. It is convenient for readers to enjoy the happiness brought by the novel while also learning relevant knowledge about that period of history, so that readers can learn knowledge and improve themselves in happiness. I am very much looking forward to the collision between Xuanyuan and Chi You!