Transmigrated to Another World: Starting Out as an Adventurer

I'm an author and it's not too much to give myself five stars [laughing evilly]

The reading is 4 stars and the writing is 3 stars. One star is because of the character Leng Ying. The other one star can be improved. It is not a big problem. It lies in the shaping of the character, such as growth. Reading novels is to watch the character's changes, personality, strength, training and other processes. His daily behavior is the same except for the same. What else is there? For example, experience, right? This can be written, after all, I prefer daily writing, so experience is very important. It adds interest to some more modern people's behavior patterns and thinking, and what kind of sparks are caused by the collision with swords and magic. Isn't it very eye-catching? Skills Is this aspect just born and not acquired through training? The current description of this aspect is not clear enough. I don't know if I didn't see it. Another point is the two children. I think it's good to be an observer. But I think it's useless to join the team. They have no sense of existence and they are still small children. This is Is it a side dish? The protagonist team is actually not easy to write about. When the proportion of who does what is too large, it is easy to get out of control. In addition, if the author's own writing ability is not outstanding, the character creation will be a failure. This article is still readable. I will have to go through Leng Ying's section before adding more comments.

It's okay, but I want to know the role of this duck. It's obviously not a combat pet, but there are so many plots.

Adventures in other worlds are still very interesting. There are less intrigues and more human touch. Most people should like such adventures. The disadvantage is that the protagonist has low emotional intelligence. Without domineering, he feels that there is no passion. It is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it.

Why aren't many people reading such a good book? [Chigua]

Shit, I just read the book, and then I clicked on some comments out of habit, and one of the comments was from me in July 2023. I said that the name of this book was a bit familiar. I don't know why it was deleted at that time, but I think it was because I randomly inserted a woman into a few chapters and then quit it. Sure enough, I quit when I added that girl before, and I quit now too.

I quite like it. The design is pretty good and the interpersonal relationships could be better. Later, I saw that Leng Ying suddenly didn't show up in the middle of the show, which made me feel uncomfortable.

If it looks good, it should be praised and given great encouragement to the author. The whole book is humorous.

It's obviously very beautiful, but why are the ratings so low?

This novel is awesome. . It's such a fairy tale. My junior high school niece may not be able to watch it, but she can still watch it if she's bored.