Bai Wuchang Live Broadcast, I Can See the Lifespan Progress Bar

This is my first book review, it's really well written. Can the author not let himself go so freely when writing? Clear the thread, write more about the Internet, and become more famous. Don't always write about your daughter and ex-wife. Is the daughter a foreshadowing? I will write more carefully when I dig it later. If you really want to use the word water, break it down into idioms or write more comments and dialogues to interact with the audience. I will report everything with less than 3 stars, even if I think what he or she said is right, except for some who made detailed suggestions. Although I really want to encourage the author, I really don't want to let myself go anymore! @ Thin grain

Kuoyi, this is the first time I've read about the subject of lifespan [Like]

Who is in charge of my fleeting time? Touching the keys with your fingertips, playing and singing my sorrow?

It's pretty good, but I personally feel that some methods can only be implemented through live broadcasting and the lifespan limit is too big. And now that the underworld has come out, there will definitely be ghosts. If your phone is broken or you are in danger and you don't have time to start the live broadcast, it will be useless. In addition, I hope the author can strengthen the physical fitness of the protagonist and improve himself. After all, it is better to ask for others than to ask for yourself.

Author, let me tell you a story. There is an author who wrote a novel. He suddenly had his tail docked. Then a reader got angry and went to the author's house and stabbed the author thirty-three times. The reader was fine, but he only lost some money to the author. The author went to the hospital. Unexpectedly, the author's attending doctor was the reader. The reader looked at the author thoughtfully for a long time, bowed and said: "We tried our best." Author, tail docking is not a good thing. Come and tell me your home address.

It's really beautiful! ! It's the first time I've seen this type of novel and it's so addictive. It's really good. Nesness, the author should work hard!

The thinking is clear and the story is exciting, very good. In the past, I only briefly read novels, but I read this novel carefully, word by word. The author is really talented [like][like][like][like]

Nice! Just follow this case by case, it is very comfortable to watch. It would be great if the male protagonist's children could also inherit this system ability [Thinking]

The author has a good book. Can you pay attention to me? Author, you have so little, it's not enough at all @

The book looks good, keep it up!

The plot is good, very exciting, but there is too little to watch [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

I've seen Chapter 42, so I'll read it as I see fit. 😁😁😁 I've seen Chapter 60. 😁😁😁

Compared to a funeral anchor, one attention scares people to death! Much better

Come on, beautiful Ni

What? The author's bookshelf is all overbearing. It's really unexpected to write such an article [I understand]

I finished reading it in one day. It's so short. I'm short of books again.

It seems to be okay at the moment. If it is at this level, it is worth watching.

The author writes very well, please hurry up and try to update more in the future, [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Good! I have seen some funeral live streaming systems before, and I think this one looks better and doesn't feel watery!

Super good-looking, @ makes you grounded, not grounded [laughing and crying]

The plot is novel and exciting. Could you please the author and update it quickly?

Yes, many people don't know about funeral culture now. Recommended

Great writing, keep it up

Well written, keep it up

The author writes very well

Very nice, but a little lacking

Come on, don't stop

It's interesting! Keep writing to the end

It looks good, but I just don't like it [face covering]

Very good, not bad