Dragon Ball: Fused Spirit Gohan

I absolutely love this author's books. I've read every single one of them, and they're all of exceptionally high quality. Highly recommended!

It's really good. The fact that Gohan's personality isn't changed just because he's read the original story and has fused with the memories of the transmigrators doesn't change the original story. The power level increase is only slightly higher than in the original story, which is negligible. This is the correct way to read Dragon Ball. The power level of the transmigrators in Dragon Ball stories is ridiculously inflated. Broly is weak compared to them.

It's pretty good, but the handling of Bulma is still quite unclear. Try to make it as reasonable as possible, but that's enough, please don't create a harem! Bulma represents a childhood regret; anything more would be excessive. After all, it's based on the original Goku, and Goku isn't the type to cheat.

It's really well written, a treasure of an author! Putting Goku and Bulma together fulfills the regret we had when we watched Dragon Ball. The descriptions of Bulma's psychology are really great. Also, the author shouldn't make Goku weaker than Gohan; having them chase each other makes it more interesting. Don't make Goku feel like he has no presence!

Keep it up! You write well!

Finally, I'm seeing some normal Dragon Ball fanfiction! Most Dragon Ball fanfiction is basically mindless and simplistic (especially with mindless power level increases), but I haven't felt that way about yours yet. Keep it up!!

The writing is alright, considering it's just fan fiction. It incorporates many game, TV, and manga plots, and I feel the length is just right. I hope next time you won't add your own subjective ideas into the novel, and let the story unfold its own plot and setting.

The only Dragon Ball fanfiction I could actually read on Tomato magazine has such a low rating and nobody seems to be reading it. Other Dragon Ball fanfiction is basically a disaster; the original Dragon Ball is notorious for its inconsistent power levels, making fanfiction even harder to write. Aside from the rushed ending that made it feel a bit rushed, this book is excellent.

I've finally found a book about Gohan, but it's not about someone transmigrating into Gohan. I get so annoyed by Satan every time I watch Dragon Ball òᆺó

The content is quite good, but most people probably won't want to see the censored scenes of intense conflict. Isn't Dragon Ball all about the epic battles and epic clashes? However, the author's everyday life is also very well written; who knows, maybe the conflict scenes won't be annoying either? 😏