Dragon Ball: Fused Spirit Gohan

I really like the author's books. I have read every book by the author. The quality is very high. I highly recommend it.

It's very good-looking. Gohan's character in the original novel will not be changed just because he has read the original novel and merged the memories of the time travellers. The growth rate of his combat power is only a little higher than that of the original novel. It is innocuous. This is the correct way to open Dragon Ball. The speed at which the combat power of various Dragon Ball time travelers expands without thinking is simply outrageous. Broly is weak compared to them.

It's pretty cool, but the treatment of Bulma is still very unclear. Just try to make it as reasonable as possible, but for now, don't start a harem (´△｀) Bulma is a childhood regret, any more would be too much. After all, it's based on the original Goku, and Goku is not the kind of person who would cheat.

The writing is really good, the treasure author, let Goku and Bulma be together, which solved the regret we had when watching Dragon Ball. The description of Bulma's psychology is really good, and the author should not make Goku weaker than Gohan, let them chase each other, this is interesting, don't write Goku without a sense of existence!

Come on! You wrote well!

I finally saw a normal Dragon Ball fanfic. Most of the Dragon Ball fanfics basically have a kind of no-brainer writing [especially those about improving combat power without brains], but it's only written by you, the author. I don't have this feeling at the moment, come on! !

The writing is okay. After all, it's just a fan. It incorporates plots from many games, TV, and comics. I feel that the length is just right. I hope that next time I won't include the author's subjective thoughts in the novel and let the story unfold its own plot and setting.

The only Dragon Ball fanfic on Tomato that I have read has such a low rating and no one has read it yet. Other Dragon Ball fanfics are basically one-hit wonders. Compared to the original Dragon Ball, which is famous for its power collapse, the fanfics are even more difficult to write. This book is very good except for the anxious ending and a slightly sloppy ending.

I finally found a book about Gohan who didn't travel through time to become Gohan. Every time I watch Dragon Ball, I get annoyed by Satanòᆺó

The content is very good. Most people may not want to see the Shura Field in the deleted scenes. Isn't Dragon Ball just about fists and feet breaking stars? However, the author's daily life is also well written. What if the Shura field is not annoying [laughing]