I'm Going to Be a Champion

Please keep up the good work, thank you very much to the author.

It's alright. Speaking of which, if you're going for an Ice-type specialization, you could consider an Ice Daruma in Daruma Mode. Daruma Mode is Ice and Fire type and also has Flame Charge, which will give Steel-types a little shock. 😏😏😏

The author writes very well; among all the Pokémon novels I've read, this is one of the best. I hope the author keeps up the good work and updates frequently.

Keep up the good work, author!

The author writes very well; I recommend specializing in this area. I haven't seen many articles that focus on specialization.

I think it's written quite well, but I have a few minor suggestions (just a quick mention, it's okay if you don't write it this way, it might even be better this way, just adding a bonus). For example, the Pokémon's calls don't always have to be the full voice. Like Pikachu's call, sometimes it's "Pika-pi," and Eevee could also be "Bu-bu~bu." (Just a small suggestion, it doesn't matter whether you adopt it or not, please don't attack me.)

Well written, keep it up!

It's really good! Just wondering, is there a female lead? ❤️

Author, add another Blizzard King at the end, and it can super evolve.

This is very well written; it's rare to find a story where Eevee doesn't evolve into Sylveon. For Ice-type specialization, I think Cloyster and Crabble are good choices.