As a Sword Spirit, Raising a Sword Immortal Makes Perfect Sense

This is actually quite good. I'm deducting one star because the pacing is too fast and the scene transitions are a bit abrupt. I suggest adding a dividing line. As for the fast pace, I believe many people would agree. This book felt like a diary entry to me.

It's good, to my liking, but there's not enough of it. I hope the author won't be ungrateful and force me to kneel down and beg. 😏

As the author, I think it's fair to give myself a perfect score 😏 There were indeed some setting issues in certain chapters, which have now been corrected. It's worth mentioning here that the protagonist's cultivation world isn't that powerful. He's not like the immortals in "Covering the Sky," but more like the level in the Mortal Realm arc of "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality."

Everything is good, except it's still too short.

When man and sword become one, one is invincible. This saying has now come true. Throughout the myriad realms, we fear neither gods nor demons. If we encounter them, we sword cultivators will slay them with our swords. Those who enter China must uphold their nature. Therefore, gods are forbidden from entering China. The subject matter is novel and the plot is amazing.

I want a single female lead, either the second sister or Luo Tianxin. But it feels so bad, I also want two female leads, the second sister and Luo Tianxin. I'm so conflicted. But then I feel that either choice would be unfair to one of their feelings. 🥺 The male protagonist's power increase is described too simply; he just finds various metals or ores and absorbs their special energies.

Great! It's been a long time since I've finished a book in two consecutive days. The middle part seemed to have some flaws, perhaps due to the author being criticized and becoming withdrawn. They made some adjustments later, but it didn't reach the peak of the beginning. Overall, it's still good, and I recommend it to those who like slow-burn novels.

Is it possible that the reason this book has so few readers is because of its title? 🍉

Chapter 34 is quite good so far.

This is well-written and worth recommending, but there are some plot holes that some people may find hard to accept. For example, there's the part where a certain female swordswoman was praised to the skies but was then easily defeated by Sister Leg 😏. Although I understood Sister Leg's strength later on, her combat power wasn't fully described at the beginning, which is a problem.