Reborn as a Golden Crow, I Choose to Claim the Sun Star for Myself

I hope readers can give me your comments and tell me about the shortcomings of this book. I will grow in improving it. Thank you! [Salute] Key points: 1. The voice has been reasonably canceled in Chapter 63, and the protagonist has benefited from it. 2. The notepad has been recovered in Chapter 77 and merged into another treasure in Chapter 80, which was obtained by the protagonist.

Come on, come on, come on

It's really poisonous for you to create a notepad. You just write it yourself and create a copy. You are trying to force a relationship with them. You said you would not have a relationship with them in the early stage, and then they were disconnected. It's really poisonous.

After reading Chapter 11, I finally understood why the rating was so low, regardless of the notepad set by the author. Let's talk about how the author has always wanted to describe the appearance of the main characters as well as the protagonist's temper and personality in various ways. From these aspects, as a reader, I feel that I can skip reading. The more I read, the more I feel that the author has written too hard and overdone the characters and temperament. After going too far, in Chapter 11, the brain circuit is not normal, and there is another divine twist, turning himself into an ordinary person. It is really unnecessary.

After reading it for a while, let me briefly explain. This is a prehistoric novel. I haven't figured out the realm or anything. I have always been confused. The timeline has not been fully understood. I was confused while reading it. Also, do you want to accept this or not? I don't think it is too descriptive. I personally recommend clarifying the timeline. The first one is what timeline is it now? Three tribes or immortals and demons. Has Hongjun become a saint? Has he started the three lectures? If not, there is no quasi-saint now because there is no way to go. Just the Chaos Demon God and the dragon, phoenix, and unicorn that rely on luck. The rest cannot reach this level, so I have a headache. About you. Relying on the Chaos Clock to accurately predict the Holy Spirit, I am a little speechless.

No wonder the rating is low? A Liang Jie was so frightened that he became like this. He even abandoned his birthplace. Can he even abandon his own woman later? One sentence brings the protagonist's life. I gave you a chance but you didn't use it. [You taste carefully]

It was written well in the front, but it started to be poisonous in the back... Ao Guang, who had no potential to save, tried to lick the Qilong clan, but others were unwilling to get too close and it would cause karma. It was too many times. Secondly, the red-haired ancestor wanted to reveal the news about the magic treasure, and asked Ao Guang to listen.

. . . The plot is okay, but the Taiyin, the diary and the voice are really poisonous.

Did the diary fly away by itself? Venomous brothers, run! Please see Chapter 14 for details

There is a reason for your low score. I thought that after you swallowed Taiyi, you became stronger, stronger in heels, everything became stronger, oh, it was awesome, but as a result, you ran away when you encountered anything, and hid when you encountered anything. Alas, you are not as good as Emperor Jun and Taiyi in the original work. Although you died in the end, you also had a glorious life. Donghuang Taiyi held the innate treasure, and the nine dominant clans and the nine ancestral witches died together in the chaos. Commanding hundreds of millions of monster clans to fight, how well written it is, look at what you are writing now, it is not interesting at all.