Gu Xuan's Path to Immortality

Five-star support, well written. No obvious poisonous spots. The disadvantage is that it has no characteristics. Suggestion one: for important supporting characters, it is best to focus on the character. Second, it should be written with characteristics, such as golden fingers, exercises, magic weapons, copies, spiritual animals, etc., With characteristics and memory points. Third, if the pig's feet are powerful, don't write them as wet nurses. Come on, author.

You can read it, the characters all have brains, write it quickly, there are too few

What happens next?

At present, it seems that the characters are full-bodied, their intelligence is online, and their readability is extremely high.

This book is the smartest book I have ever read. Both the protagonist and the villain have brains. Everyone has their own little thoughts. Unlike other books, only the protagonist is smart.

I personally hope the protagonist leaves the family