Gu Xuan's Path to Immortality

Five stars! Well written. No obvious flaws. The only drawback is the lack of distinctive features. Suggestions: 1. Important supporting characters should have their personalities more developed. 2. Characters should be more memorable, with features like cheat codes, cultivation techniques, magical artifacts, dungeons, and spirit beasts highlighted. 3. The protagonist is powerful, but don't portray him as just a healer. Keep up the good work, author!

It's a good read; the characters are all intelligent. Hurry up and write more; there's too little of this.

What happened next?

So far, the characters are well-developed and intelligent, making the story highly readable.

This is the most intellectually stimulating book I've ever read. Both the protagonist and the antagonist are intelligent, and everyone has their own hidden agendas, unlike other books where only the main character is exceptionally clever.

Personally, I hope the protagonist leaves the family.