Uma Musume: The Black Warrior

It took me a day to read it in one sitting. It is an excellent Ma Ni fanfic. The writing is fairly smooth and comfortable to read. There are many illustrations and sufficient explanations of settings, making it easy for outsiders to read. It can be viewed both inside and outside the circle. But for the inherent skill panel similar to the game system in this article, I personally think it is a bit redundant and destroys the sense of immersion. It may be better to integrate this inherent skill into the world view like "Blue Prison" or "Kuroko's Basketball". Regarding the extra chapter, I think it is worth writing, just like what the review said: "Ordinary people achieve success, and extraordinary horses enjoy family love." The two-way soul redemption, as long as it is well written, may become a masterpiece comparable to "The Name of the King". However, the "mixed feeling" of watching this extra chapter inserted into the main film (especially if the world view on both sides is not the same) will be relatively heavy. I suggest that you either don't write it for the time being and wait until the main film is over to write it, or simply open another separate book and don't mix it with the main film. I hope the author can work hard! ! !

There are very few stories about horse racing girls in Tomato. I personally think it is very interesting. After all, there is a system to hope that the protagonist will not be too weak, and it will be very bad if he loses. I support the author and hope that there will be more updates.

It looks pretty good, and the sense of immersion is very high. If you have played Ma Niang games before, this is a thoroughly enjoyable article. I won so many times, and I'm so happy. Maybe some readers think it's not very satisfying because the protagonist doesn't win all the way or something, but I find it very satisfying. It's as comfortable as taking a good rest, having good luck when going out, and getting 4 colorful circles when you have nothing to do. It's so smooth. The growth process of the protagonist is also clearly visible. As a Ma Niang book, there is really nothing wrong with it [Chigua] It's a pity that there aren't many posts that I like to read, but I feel that the style of this book is passionate, so this aspect doesn't seem to be important. To be honest, after reading the previous chapter again recently, the most uncomfortable thing for me is the timing of losing. This is also the reason why I feel more and more uncomfortable in the later chapters. I also feel that the protagonist is not unable to lose, but the time has not yet come or the time has been said. You can lose when you are at your weakest, you can lose when you are at your peak, and you can lose when you have not reached absolute invincibility. Moreover, the description in the following article makes people quite uncomfortable. I can just ignore this matter and not care about it, but I have to talk about it all the time. I can't feel any other effect except adding to the annoyance in my heart. Of course, this is a free novel, and I know not to be too demanding. It's just that the more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I can bear it. The author is busy now, and hopes that the writing style will be more uplifting. I prefer the horse girls to post happily every day and experience the enthusiasm of the game, instead of constantly seeing them feel sad for their ability and reputation. Come on O(∩_∩)O

The strongest horse girl currently in service in China, the undefeated eight-time G1 champion. The undefeated overlord, the unyielding king. Don't be afraid of clouds covering your eyes. Accept your glory, accept your failure, failure? Even the uncrowned king can gallop on the field! Then you who once dominated the world, shouldn't you return to the game and create new glory? Good book, excellent work, Ao Shou. As the pinnacle of the same type of fandom, he is dignified and dignified. The settings in Jockey Girl are rigorous, with deletions and annotations. The descriptions of Ma Niang's competitions are a bit boring. Most of the competitions did not make me feel immersed or empathetic, and the excitement was mediocre. The description of Ma Niang's emotions after she suffered a tragic injury is extremely bald. The main book is easy to read, even those who have never read Jockey Girl can read it. But plainness is the main tone of my reading. Fluctuations are also knives, encouraging and unimpressive. I think the climax is the sentence: "The king will still be his ministers until he dies."

It looks good, and people like me who have never played Jockey Girl and don't know much about horse racing can find it very comfortable. (The author's generous annotations and illustrations are truly amazing) (The chapter "Ten Thousand Words of Feelings" was very touching, a land of etiquette... It really makes people feel ashamed)

I like this book very much. It can be regarded as the only masterpiece in my mind among the Tomato Horse Girl fanfics. If I had to rank it, it would probably be ranked in the top 8. It is a daily-oriented horse girl novel. It may not be as local literature as "The Miscellaneous Fish Horse Girl", it may not have as tightly arranged competitions as "Tokyo Horse Girl", and it may not have the series of setbacks like "Become a Horse Girl with Good Brothers". How can I put it, it is the kind of journey that an ordinary horse racing girl protagonist should have, normal and nuanced, and touching people's hearts. There isn't much in the game, but it's definitely enough to watch. The popular science, details and illustrations are also very comprehensive, and it is also very suitable for people who are semi-involved in this circle, so that they can know some details of reality. As for reality... I think the "spoilers" of Horse Racing Girl have a different kind of charm. The fact that this project overlaps with reality is a big reason why I like this story. It makes me think that I may be able to see, hear, and feel Ulala, Raging Waves, and Necha. It turns out that Geng Si's extra story hopes to be released in a separate volume (looking forward to it)

It's so pretty, I can't stop watching it! After reading this book, I went to various websites to find some fans of Jockey Girl, but I still didn't feel the same way about this one. I can only say that it would be very difficult for me if the author didn't update it ten times a day [laughing evilly] Ahem, and also, can there be more plots between the protagonist and braised tofu? It feels a little sweet to see them getting intimate [blowing kiss]

The characters in the book are illustrated with illustrations when they appear, which is very friendly to newcomers and people who don't know much about it. During the dialogue, some will also be accompanied by text explanations. The main character is not a classic Triple Crown runner, so less has been written about this. The overall style is more everyday, so I don't like it very much. I wish the author will get better as he writes more! [Eat melon]

Chenlong Gengsi (Silong): The world's top horse girl, the legendary horse girl at the palace level, the strongest in the world, and the king of the field. Career record: 18 championships and one runner-up in 19 games, 14 career G1 championships, undefeated French classic triple crown, two-time champion of the Arc de Triomphe, two-time champion of the Japan Cup, winner of the three major tournaments in the world in the second half of the year, undefeated and six G1s throughout the year (referring to within one year).

It's rare that the main character is a horse racing girl fan, you must support it