After Dumping My Ex on a Dating Show, the Best Actor Confesses to Me

Du Yuesheng seems to be the name of the Shanghai Youth Gang boss during the Republic of China!

After reading 60 chapters, I found it quite sweet, and the pace is also quite fast. However, it seems that there are quite a lot of intersections when I was a child, but I haven't written them carefully. I don't know if they will be written down later. Then the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist were a bit unclear. I only wrote that the female protagonist called the male protagonist brother when she was a child. The female protagonist must have awakened from this role. The interaction with the male protagonist was also the same. It should be that the male protagonist has a very good-looking face and a figure. There is no description of the figure. I only wrote that he is over 1.8 Meters tall, and he is very considerate, so the female protagonist is moved.

It's not bad. The content is compact and it's a cool novel. The heroine is also very direct and abusive. But in the previous chapter, I felt that the male and female protagonists kissed each other without a confirmed relationship (it's outrageous. They have been kissing each other but are not together yet, so there is no confirmed relationship). Moreover, the heroine is not very talkative. The heroine just cries when she is angry or unhappy. Then the hero coaxes the heroine into not talking, and then they kiss again before settling [awkward laugh][awkward laugh] Oh my god, it's a cool novel and it's not a tyrant novel. I really got tired of it.

The whole book revolves around the love variety show, with some efforts on the mental journey, thoughts and growth of the male and female protagonists, and some discussions on three outlooks, outlook on life and other aspects. However, there is a slight lack of plot development and character extension. I hope that the plot and character images can be improved and expanded. The character here is not only the protagonist, but also a supporting role.

Looks good, cheers to the author [blowing kiss]

Knock well! ! ! Really good-looking! The moon shines high on the green mountains, wishing Shanyue eternal happiness! ! ! Looking forward to married life and having a baby [laughing]

Gu Wanyun really has a big face [punch out][punch out]

I really like the author's thoughts, it's so good!

I like the attitude of the heroine and the double standards of the hero! Hurry up and do it [laughing]

It looks good, good luck to the author!