After the Demolition, I Still Had to Study Hard

This is my debut novel, and I feel that what I wrote is very confusing, but every incident and plot was thought and acted according to the current protagonist's thoughts. Whether she is cautious, scared, drifting, or silly, they are all her different states. After writing, it is not without thinking. I'm on my way. I just feel that my ideas are a bit messy and my writing and wording are average. I don't want to ruin the story. When I return from practice, I should start the second part. I hope it won't be too long. Thank you everyone for reading my novel. If you think it's good, can you give me a five-star review? Meow Meow Meow needs it very much, thank you all again!

I didn't pick up handsome generals who were poisoned, injured, and mentally violent. I didn't meet or match injured, crippled, or crippled mercenary hunters. The heroine is careful to develop herself slowly, and she is not overwhelming as soon as she comes here. I like it very much. The author will work hard to update it. There are a lot of typos

It's very good-looking. I liked watching it very much in the first part. The heroine is not a super powerful military cadet, but is one of the top ten in the class. She is a bit ordinary. I really like it. But in the back, the heroine brought plants from the first planet and that kind of tea. There is no follow-up. After the heroine went to rescue the two teammates who were kidnapped, it didn't look good! I really enjoyed watching the one in front!

[Petrochemical] The second half is a mutation. He destroyed the laboratory to save his friends, was forced to experiment on humans, was rescued by a robot and was barely alive, lost his invisibility, and returned to the Emperor Star to destroy the experimental organization? Being tricked by the old boss into getting pregnant with three children, the staff at the starting point service center followed the protagonist and acted cautiously before, and they were doing well. [What] [awkward laughter] [shock]

I really like interstellar themes, and the heroine has a good personality. It's just that the descriptions in many places are too colloquial. Some of the previous dialogues don't use double quotation marks, and there are many long paragraphs of text that look confusing.

The writing is very nice. This interstellar novel is not cliché at all. I really like this kind of plot that strives to upgrade. The writing is really great. The author has worked hard to improve it.

It's very beautiful, the content and the author's description are very good, but the progress is a bit fast. Is the author planning to publish a second book? I still didn't want to continue writing anymore, so I just ended it! ! !

It's pretty good looking. I don't feel like there's anything bad about it at the moment. Come on.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I like it very much, the plot and narrative are very good