From Wandering Cultivator to Clan Founder

It's so comfortable to read. Among the Tomato Family books, yours is the one that suits my taste the best. You start your own family from scratch, and then you have your own heirs as the main line of the family. There will be no regrets. Many books have space to write about relatives but don't write about their own heirs. Relatives and friends who have created the country by themselves enjoy it. It's uncomfortable to read. Is there any similar family story about starting from scratch? I can't stand it anymore, so this is the one. Please recommend.

Yes, it is rare to find a book that was written from scratch.

This book is definitely the king of family novels. The author has returned during the graduation season a few months ago. It has great potential. I look forward to the following chapters.

It was so beautiful that I couldn't breathe. I couldn't be allowed to die of poisoning alone. It doesn't matter that you, a monk with level 2 Qi training, can't defeat more than 40 homeless bandits. It's not like a village that makes a living by hunting. It has no room for resistance. Is there still a village without guards? Our modern society has surveillance and security guards are required sooner or later. In his time, there was no such thing? When it rained during the escape, I didn't want to go home and went into the county. I didn't know the road. How could I support my family of seven on a mountain? And later on, the protagonist's father bets the lives of his family of seven that an escort agency is a good person, Shinroku, it's so cool!

This book is one of the richer novels about cultivating immortals that I feel is written, and it is also the second novel that I think can be praised. Compared with the structure of the writing, the development of events has the shadow of a collection of mortal stories, and it also has the main line of the rise of the family leader. Some examples are like personal growth and development. It feels like one person can prosper a family. From a narrative perspective, this book is relatively compact, without deliberately creating the feeling of adding perspective and filling in the text. The shortcoming is that the description of society and family is unrealistic. No matter in what period, there will be class states, cities, sects, etc., And the text needs to be revised. Also, the narration of the Qiankun Landscape Picture does not feel like the development of a unique treasure, and the children only have their spiritual consciousness to enter it a few times. Overall, the score should be quite high and recommended. Come on, give it a try.

Not bad 👍 Keep writing, don't let it end badly. It's best to write thousands of chapters for a perfect ending. It's best for the protagonist to ascend to the fairy world and become the strongest. His family is also the strongest in the fairy world. He is invincible in the universe. What can I say about the author?

The writing is simple and detailed, and it is written with great effort and seriousness. The author is still great, and he has written about the process of the protagonist growing from an ordinary child to a powerful cultivator. I have seen 80%, and I feel that if I use the standards of Tomato Divine Text, the old bookworm thinks there are some areas that can be optimized for the author's reference: 1. As a family story, the family's participation is a little low and the growth is a little too plain. In this regard, you can refer to the Black Snake family legend, which seems to be called Snake Ancestor or Ancestor to save lives. It is also the Zhou family, where generations of Zhou family children grow up and fall, and the plot and emotions are very ups and downs. 2. As an article about cultivating immortality, the participation degree of the game is too low, it has little impact on the growth of the protagonist, and the difficulty of using the game is too low. In this aspect, we can refer to the protagonist Fang Ping's path to alchemy. He also grew up from the lowest point. Although there is a cheat in the alchemy, it still requires the protagonist to devote a lot of time and energy to practice. Moreover, the cultivation process is very difficult and dangerous, and the foundation building process takes many years of planning. Growth is not easy, but it grows steadily and becomes strong, which is very comfortable to watch. 3. As a biography of a protagonist, the plot is a bit off. A large part of the story is about the battle between the human and demon clans in that mountain range. During this period, a lot of descriptions were made about Cao Yu and the physical cultivator Peng, which was very impressive. The plot in that section was exciting, but it was a little off track for the protagonist. Writing about characters should focus on the characters themselves. You can refer to The Days of Immortal Cultivation without Golden Finger, and the books about A Female Body Cultivator. There are many characters in them but they always develop around the protagonist. I am very grateful to the author for his hard work. I have written some personal suggestions and look forward to the author's next good book!

Yes, it's a story about family cultivation that I like to read. The male protagonist was born in the Eastern Wasteland and accidentally rescued a Qi practitioner. From then on, he knew that there are immortals in the world. Then due to drought, the village was attacked by deserters, and the family fled... The male protagonist later reached the third level of Qi training and learned a small spell, and then went out to work for a few years. Later, because he felt that the road to immortality was long and he would be alone, he wanted to go home and have a look. After returning, he found that one of his family members had the qualifications to cultivate immortals, so he planned to develop a family of immortals. The male protagonist has average qualifications and is not a genius. He takes it one step at a time. After reaching the Golden Core stage, he meets another female protagonist who is also at the Golden Core stage. The female protagonist will help the male protagonist guard the family while the male protagonist goes out to find resources...

Come on, author, I like to see this kind of self-made man [smile][smile][smile][smile] Can the author update it more? Not enough [shy][shy]

The writing is good, but the depiction of the protagonist's tribe is not clear enough. I can't even remember two of their names. There are no other problems. As for some people's comments that the protagonist has to sacrifice to support the tribe, it is better to practice on his own. I think they are farting. The protagonist is the protagonist. If the tribe has paid more than the protagonist, what is the use of the protagonist? Not to mention that this family has descendants of its own brothers, and aren't most of the spiritual stones earned from the family business used by the protagonist? A family always develops much faster than one person. Besides, some people think that cultivation requires too much spiritual energy for casual cultivators to practice. The protagonists have all reached the third level of Qi training in the secular world, which means that the cultivation speed is a little slower. Moreover, casual cultivators can also practice in Fangshi. If casual cultivators are talented, there will be no force to recruit them? If your talent is average, why don't you, a casual cultivator, go hunting monsters and explore for treasure? Where do you get the resources to practice? Even if spiritual objects only exist on spiritual veins, those spiritual veins do not all have owners. Otherwise, where would the demon clan be? And it doesn't seem to say that spiritual objects are only found in mineral veins, right? The second-order cold iron was not found in the veins, but there were fewer of them. Isn't this normal? There is nothing wrong with the description of the environment for cultivating immortals. The only thing is that the author should write it quickly. It would be too uncomfortable to read it in one sitting, and I have to look for books in the shit.