A Substitute Bride for the Villainous Boss

It's good, but a bit short. I thought it would have at least a hundred chapters. After reading it, I kept wandering between wanting to read it and not reading it. Because it was only 80 chapters, I didn't want to finish it so quickly. I felt like there were some holes left unfilled. Gong Qian's attitude towards Shou is not very good, but I think Gong is actually duplicitous. The attack can be called "wolf destruction" in one word, and the protection comes a little slowly. It's really useless [sending my heart], I have a beautiful, gentle and cute (I think she is super cute) wife, why is it so slow to protect her (if I had one, I would cling to her like a follower every day [crying], so jealous) Shou is gentle and beautiful. I like this type of character very much. I think the plot after rescuing the female supporting character (probably when the Kongming Realm was attacked by the Xuanming Demon) is the point where Shou's mentality and behavior towards others begins to change. Some people may think that Shou is the Holy Mother, but in the original world, Shou was always a spoiled young master from childhood to adulthood, so what's wrong with being good to others? Besides, Shou is not always good to everyone, and what's wrong with being kind to people who are good to him and loving Wujiwu at the same time? [Almost crying] This is the only book I have read completely in recent times [crying] There are some areas where the author needs to continue to improve. I think he can write well. Come on, author! The author has potential!

I really like this sense of fate. The plot is not delayed at all, and the writing is also very good. The words are smooth and ordinary, but the storyline has ups and downs. This contradictory and harmonious feeling is really poignant. The protagonist is full of characters. I really recommend it, but it is a bit short [Love]

I really like it, but I feel a little bit sad at the end. I hope the author can quickly bring Shou and Gong together! ! Sometimes torture and sometimes torture! ! But in the end, they all tortured me! ! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry]

My wife's writing style is really good... The novel has a very graphic feel, and the characters' personalities are vividly displayed on the page in just a few strokes. Liu made Lu understand what love is and how to love. Lu helped Liu grow up and taught his wife step by step... Although the ending felt a bit rushed, basically all the foreshadowing was explained, which is still very good. It can be seen that the author is writing this novel very seriously. Finally, group portraits are really difficult to write. It is easy to deviate from the emotional and growth lines of the protagonists, resulting in blurred focus and themes. How to balance this aspect is a test of ability. For example, the author also said that he did not develop Tong'er's part according to the original plan. Overall, it's great and highly recommended! Kua Kua Mrs. ~ Looking forward to the author's wife's next book.

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It's super beautiful, but it's just too little. [Blowing Kiss] The author has a great imagination, and his writing style is also very good. I have to firmly believe in myself in the future, it's really great. A journey of a hundred miles is half a mile, and it will really become more difficult when the results come, but don't doubt yourself! Hurry up and write more, and produce excellent works stably and efficiently [Sending Hearts]

A bit confused, but generally clear to a little bit [I understand]

I stayed up all night and finished reading it. The novel is very interesting, but I think the author still has a lot of things that he didn't explain clearly. The story of Qingmu Xianjun, Dongfang, and Wen Zheliu's original parents was incomplete [crying] [crying]

Super super super super super super beautiful. The author's writing style is super beautiful. I haven't read such a comfortable text for a long time. He is super good at writing. The plot is compact. The ending feels a little rushed. The emotional line of receiving and attacking is super sweet! ! ! Wooooowoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo… [Blowing kiss]

The plot is generally very well arranged and the plot is attractive, but some parts are still too concise and could use a little processing. 80 Chapters is still too short for a fantasy fairy tale. If the length is longer, the effect will definitely be very good. Except for A Liu and Lu Xingfeng, the personalities and psychological activities of other supporting characters will be better displayed. With an attractive storyline, this book can be called a very good novel. For someone who can finish reading in three hours, the number of articles is indeed a little short, but the key to a good novel is not only the number of words, but also the plot of the story. As long as the plot is attractive enough, then the novel is a successful work.