Apartment: From the Start, I Accidentally Kissed Zhuge Dali?

[An ensemble story about the whole apartment, not a solo act] [The powerhouse heroine and Mo Fei/Rose will also appear] [Mostly faithful to the original, no major changes] [Contains some other elements] [The protagonist has a tragic background. This is a story of redemption, which you can skip if you like.] What should you do when you open your eyes and see Zhang Wei about to crash into Zhuge Dali? Obviously, stop them! Wait, the momentum's too strong! He's going in for the A!! Yifei: “This is the first time I've met someone with a brain as big as Zhuge Dali's. Ye Yuan, you're something else!” Ziqiao: “No way, Ye Yuan! You mastered my Lü family's Spring and Autumn in less than two days?! You're going to take off!” Zhuge Dali: “Ye Yuan, I want to give you an A!” Ouyang Mofei: “Damn! This is the first time I've seen someone actually go toe-to-toe with me!” Hu Qiang: “Oh, Xiao Ye! I really don't know anyone named Zhang Wei!” P.S. This is my first time writing, so the prose is rough and plot holes are bound to happen. If that bothers you, please don't read. There are other elements and some mild OOC, so if that bothers you, please don't read. The protagonist's backstory is what it is. If you don't want to read it, then don't; I'm not going to beg you. The direction of the plot is definitely connected to the protagonist's background. You could call this an early-story sore spot, if you like. I'm happy to hear suggestions from all you readers, but please don't just say what you don't like. You get to say your piece and feel better while I stew over it for half a day. At least tell me how I should change it and in what direction. Lastly, I read all your comments and such, so go easy on me. I'm sensitive.