Douluo Dalu: I Became Qian Renxue's Second Martial Soul

Cheer up for your first comment [making faces] Mom, I met a reader who forwarded negative reviews. All the novels he reviewed were rated one or two stars [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying] I don't want to meet him. My little heart can't bear it [sad]

The author, cheers, cheers, cheers

It's good to read. I'm looking forward to the story after the heroine has a body. Recently, I like the novel about the heroine opening up the Golden Finger and joining the Wuhun Palace. I'm crazy [face covering] [face covering]. This article really suits my taste. I've added it to my bookshelf for a long time, but the updates are slow and short [laughing]. Come on, work hard and write more.

The author is great, the writing is great, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The whole text is lyrical and positive, and there is also a very naughty author. It is completely different from the original work. There are only two female protagonists, Qian Zhenxue, and the second martial soul Ah Shang, which perfectly makes up for the regret that Qian Zhenxue became the female supporting role. Although the writing is very good, it is just a little bit worse. It would be even better if I could torture Tang San, but it would be easy to be blocked if I wrote it that way, so I personally think it's pretty good [sending my heart]. I don't think it's good enough. Teacher, the one about making a contract looks quite awkward. It feels like a weakened version of Ye Luoli's magic. How about, author, let's make a contract? You are the Paimon (emergency food) and I am the Traveler

How to say it? [Top post] This is the best version of Qian Renxue among all the Douluo fan novels I have read. (๑°3°๑) When the heroine was born, there was a mother who was not a mother, but was better than a mother. She always took care of her and protected her tenderly. She had maternal love and no longer had a painful childhood like the original novel. ╯╰Perhaps it is a very happy thing to have a lover who loves you in different versions of Douluo fan fiction, but for the childhood Xueer, she was just a child who longed for her mother to love her. (╥ω╥`) I hope to get my mother's hug and recognition. (｡>ㅿ<｡) For Bibi Dong, maybe forgetting is the best ending! Growth requires paying a price, and the price of growth is too painful for Bibi Dong. ๐·°(৹˃̵˂̵৹)°·๐ Let her forget all the pain she has experienced, everything she once loved, and the birth of Qian Renxue, and no longer bring pain and hatred to each other. I hope the author can give Qian Renxue and Bibi Dong a good ending. After all, they were so miserable in the ending of the original work! [Crying] I hope they can gain their own happiness from this book. [Sending Hearts]

In fact, if I didn't only have five hearts, I would definitely fill up all my hearts for the author, so that you only have me in your heart. (Shy [face covering] [face covering] [laughing] [laughing] [petrified] [petrified])

Once people understand it, they will become very silent. It's not that I don't have the ability to get along with others, it's that I have no interest in making fun of myself. The ears do not hear the wrongdoings of others, and the mouth does not speak of the faults of others. Don't envy anyone, don't laugh at anyone, be alone in your own world, and let nature take its course in other people's world. ——To those who understand thoroughly. This is the most impressive novel among the many novels I have read. This passage gave me a lot of insights. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Come on [like][like]

Each chapter has sentences that contain the philosophy of life. The language is elegant and not outdated, but the updates are too slow.

It looks good, but when will the male protagonist come out? 😳, And the update is too slow, right? It's basically one chapter a day, and the number of words is so small. I really like this book, but can it be done faster?