I Become a Hokage in Pirate King

I see that there are not many bad points so far, but the obvious shortcomings of the ship flow still exist, that is, too much emphasis on the development of the protagonist's strength, resulting in a very low sense of existence of the original protagonist group. I think if the author wants to open a harem, he can leave the battle scenes to Luffy and Zoro appropriately. It is good to watch the show with Nami on the side. Also, the protagonist is a man who has a kaleidoscope, but so far I haven't seen any traces of him using illusions, which is a bit bad. In terms of details, I recommend the author to read the book Tianshi Baiye. The character settings and details in that book are very good. Follow the boat flow and focus more on group portraits. I hope there will be more of the growth process of the protagonists. In addition, if possible, I hope that the heroine can add Perona, so that he can get on the ship. Big cheers for the author!

The author must not turn Nami Robin, the empress, the princess of the fishman country, etc. Into his wife [laughs evilly]

It's great, why doesn't anyone see it?

So far, it seems pretty good, but the writing still has room for improvement. Also, I have some questions. Does the protagonist's ability to deprive the eyesight need to touch the body of the person whose eyesight is deprived of it? And does the deprived person's eyesight disappear permanently?

At first glance, the heroine is Nami, Robin, and Empress Weiwei. These four are considered the most normal.

You can have a harem, I like it

It feels pretty good. I feel like the plot goes by a bit too fast and I can't stop seeing a beautiful girl. Bro.

It's good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, thank you to the author.

The story characters are all very well written. Personally, I don't like having a harem. I don't like his character in having a harem

Personally I think it's very good