I Am Bai Qi, Who Buried 400,000 Alive, and Sister Zhou Is Livestreaming Me

The author's writing is so beautiful, come on! But there are too few updates. It would be better if there were more updates [smile][smile][smile]

Come on, the writing is very good, Huo Qubing, Li Taibai and so on. I think you can write about it. Will there be benefits in the future? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

A good story has a perfect ending. A perfect story is a pity of flaws. Bai Qi is the most famous among the four famous generals, not only for his invincibility, but also for his regrettable ending. Just like the final battle of Handan, everyone knew he could win, but in the end it left people with endless reveries. Bai Qi was sentenced to death. To put it bluntly, it actually made him sublime, leaving future generations with endless sighs. If the author changes this, to put it bluntly, and it feels good for a while, the number of readers in the future will only decrease. If you want more readers for the book, you have to create a better character. For example, the heroine is just a witness and bystander of history. She has just traveled through time. She is powerless to change. If you can write about her initial powerlessness and then her determination and ability to change slowly, major things remain the same, but small things can be changed. This can be considered a good story. A few suggestions, the author can take a look at it.

The description of the battle between Zhao Kuo and Changping is very good, but the description of Sister Zhou and the protagonist is insufficient. I hope the author can take advantage of the double penetration and add some interactions to enrich the character played by the protagonist. Since it is a live broadcast, it is normal for the anchor to want the audience to get more information, and it is also reasonable for the protagonist to want to cash in some modern technology and knowledge through Sister Zhou! Five-star praise, I hope the author will keep up the good work @ Mengmei Bingbing [send heart][send heart][send heart]

Absolutely, all the supporting characters have flesh and blood, and everyone is as imagined in their hearts. All the factors and reasons for the Battle of Changping are vividly written. Zhao Kuo is not an armchair strategist on paper. How can a person who can stand up to Bai Qi be a waste? The ending of Bai Qi's chapter may be the best ending for Lord Wu An. His body was shrouded in horse leather and the whole country was in mourning. King Qin and Bai Qi were not aware of each other and the king and his ministers knew each other. [Like] [Like] Like. Looking forward to the arrival of the First Emperor Chapter. Come on, author! ! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]o(＾▽＾)o

Not bad, not bad. It describes the ups and downs of Bai Qi very well, and then just tighten the grip on the disappearance of Chinese history [laughing evilly] I hope to see my idol champion Hou soon [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

A very good book. This first part has changed my views on Bai Qi and Zhao Kuo... I used to only know that Bai Qi was called the God of Killing and killed many people. I thought he was a cold-blooded and ruthless person. Now I know that he is not a cold-blooded and emotionless person. He may also have his own helplessness...; I only know how to talk on paper, I know that it is shallow, but now I know Kuo's talent...; The author's writing style is also good, and there are even some chapters that have a high reading threshold, so you need to enter with caution (it's a shame that I'm good at classical Chinese literature, otherwise I really wouldn't be able to understand [smile]) The introduction to this book should be quite long, but there is still very little written at the moment. I hope the author can update it soon. There will be a lot of free power generation for love! No matter what happens, I will continue to follow up [smile][smile][smile] I can only say that I highly recommend it!

Since reading this book, I feel that my classical Chinese writing is getting better and better. The author of this book is definitely a college master. It is so awesome. This classical Chinese writing was written for me and I was stunned for a moment.

Five stars, my favorite general is Bai Qi. Reading this book, my eyes turned red twice. Come on, author, please update quickly. I ran out of power today and will send it to you tomorrow.

The writing is very exciting, but there is one thing that makes me feel very dissatisfied. The person played by Lu Ren is Bai Qi, but the book repeatedly emphasizes that Lu Ren is Wu Anjun in the eyes of others. I think the name should be changed back to Bai Qi, or Lu Ren's name should be mentioned occasionally [rolls eyes]