Harry Potter: Love Grows with Time

So far it's pretty good, but is the ending going to be he or be? I prefer to be [shy] The author is great, I am going crazy, I want Sri Lanka to regret it quickly, I really want to see the ending of be! [Shy][Crazy] Besides, the heroine is too frustrated, please be nice to the heroine [I'm about to cry]

It's really beautiful! ! ! It is undeniable that it was really bloody at the beginning, but later on the sacrifice, oppression and firm belief in the war were really written out, and the story directly improved to a great height later on, and the links were intertwined. However, the emotional journey with Snape was not well written. In fact, I am a little confused about the love between them. I think they cannot fall in love, not to that extent. They can at best be comrades, working together as undercover agents, and together as heroes behind the scenes in the war. They may help each other because of their common beliefs, but it should not be because of love, but later they both won because of the power of love. Of the two endings, I prefer the second one. In fact, the first one is very good, but I really like the plot where the heroine commits suicide. She uses her death to force Harry Potter and others to believe that Andy has been possessed by Voldemort, and then uses the Horcrux to actually kill Voldemort. He is the key person every time. I don't really know how to evaluate a book. I just think this book is really well written. I enjoyed reading it in one go. It's also a short story. It has both advantages and disadvantages. The disadvantage is that the relationship between the heroine and Snape is not well written, which is a bit bloody. I also don't like the plot of how the heroine's mother gave birth to the heroine. The drunken one is a bit... I think other plots can be designed, but it is best not to write about drunken sex, which is very offensive. The backend is indeed quite depressing, but there is also warmth in it. Of course, it is undeniable that the majority of it is depressing. This may make people uncomfortable to watch, but I think it's okay. Isn't that what kind of battles are like? Of course, it's not just the battle. The heroine is really aggrieved and feels like she's being pushed away. I think the part where the heroine commits suicide is a highlight, especially the sentence about Harry Potter and killing Andy (I kind of forgot that it was not complete). I really trembled when I saw that sentence. I must have been shocked (maybe my pupils were shaken 😂😂). When I saw this sentence, my emotions fluctuated very much. For me, when the heroine said this sentence, her image was instantly sublimated. I don't have that much requirement for writing, and I can't write it myself. I just need it to look smooth. Anyway, the writing is very good. I stayed up all night to read it, and now I'm a little exhausted [face covering] [face covering]

Before I clicked on this book, I never thought that I would have a second chance with such ups and downs of emotions. The first time was Cheng Guang's Love Writing, which made me cry for a long time, but this book was like an electromagnetic bomb bombing my brain. I will always... Always remember this book [OK] It's bloody and outrageous, but its logic is self-consistent. It's a very enjoyable book, and even the character descriptions are very rich, but even if you just skip it, it's a complete story line, but the details and emotional descriptions are not in place. If it were a complete description, it would take two to three hundred chapters. It's really fun to watch, this idea is really awesome. Looking forward to the author's new book.

Although I think the plot is ridiculous, I still find it very interesting. I really don't see this kind of article very often. It's crazy and weird. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Screaming like crazy (while beating his chest) jumping up and shaking around, ahhhh! Is there anyone? (Makes a cry) This may become my only fanfic, and the other one will be removed from the shelves

I may not like explosive plots in general, but such an explosive plot is really to my liking. I give the author a thumbs up for his imagination.

The early and middle stages are quite brutal. Later on, I felt that the reversal was a bit big, and my brain is only now reacting to it. It's just that I don't seem to like the image of this heroine. Others don't like it either, but they seem to like Andy. Of course I won't criticize people I don't like. Overall it's pretty good. It's just that the reversal is too big, my little heart. Especially why Andy was approached by Voldemort in the end. I think Andy retired to the mountains and forests in the end. Even if he is the third generation Dark Lord, he shouldn't be like this. But I still give you five stars. After all, You're the only book that made me cry for an hour. Maybe it's the relationship between the protagonist and Snape that moved me, or maybe I like Andy very much, I pity him, and feel worthless for Andy... This series of emotions will not appear in other HP fanfics. So I give you five stars. Hope you can keep up the good work! [Smile]

Just one word, absolutely, the plot is very bloody, but also very logical, smooth and wonderful, the writing style is very suitable for the subject matter, some of the thoughts of the heroine are described very delicately, the characters created are very complex, but also very vivid. Fans who want to read fanfiction must come and take a look.

I feel that the male and female protagonists have no feelings and purely promote the plot. The relationship between Lupine and the female protagonist's mother also develops very suddenly. The plot is very sad but I have no emotions in my heart and can't get into it. So far, I haven't seen the female protagonist's role and everyone's happiness index has not improved. But fortunately, the writing is relatively smooth, although it is a bit verbose. But it's still good to read it before going to bed. It's good to read as a bedtime story

It suits my personal taste, but many people obviously can't stand the first-person perspective. Those who have watched Hart can actually easily figure out the story line, while those who have not watched it can easily be confused by a lot of names and jumping timelines. The heroine has a great sense of the overall situation, and the connections and emotions between the characters are very touching. Most of the people in the story are very flesh-and-blood, and it's great to write it in the first person. The short stories were also read very quickly, and they did not deviate from the character traits of these people in the original works. Very good hp article